| Reviews for Destiny's Child |
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   Storiesdr chapter 21 . 10/26/2016 Enjoyed the story so far. Hope you will be inspired to continue it. |
| kali-sinclaire chapter 21 . 2/13/2014 please update your story |
| josiah275 chapter 21 . 12/18/2012 hurry up with the next chapter please! |
| justjoe chapter 21 . 3/9/2012 This crew is seriously incompetent. The number of lapses in protocol is unacceptable. It really hurts the story, which is otherwise well done though there are several grammar errors. |
| orionastro chapter 21 . 12/7/2011 well, what an amazing story. just hope you update this very good story as soon as you can . :) |
| Firewolfe chapter 21 . 8/11/2011 Any chance of getting an update. I really enjoy this fic and would love to see more someday soon. Fire |
| Sajuuk chapter 21 . 9/12/2010 hello lol good story keep the good works but for when the next chapter ? by |
| alokin chapter 3 . 7/30/2010 "even the Humans ... " What ? The Tollan dont consider themselves humans or what ? |
| alokin chapter 16 . 5/7/2010 Now ... what are the chances of the Rapier running into Goauld that can capture them ... I can just roll my eyes at this plot line ... |
| locutes chapter 21 . 2/6/2010 great story, though I want it to get finished :) It's just to goo not to finish it! please do so, I beg thee. |
| Guardian54 chapter 21 . 10/31/2009 Why don't you ffinish this? It's really good. (in the same way that the Pacific is a small puddle, ie massive understatement) |
| Sharnorasian Empire chapter 21 . 8/16/2009 THis story is beautiful, B E A utiful... plz update plz plz plz plz plz SE |
| Red Death chapter 2 . 8/4/2009 I *know* you meant "doused" as in "extinguished" but this caused what was likely the biggest gigglefit I'll admit to having for quite some time" "douched the three burning consoles" Thats a VERY different definition that "doused." (gigglesnickerchortle) All kidding aside, this and your other works have some serious "wrongword" problems. Words that SOUND right, but aren't. For example: Were/we're. They're/there/their. Passed/past. Leek/leak. There are many more. The problem is that the words you're using have vastly different meanings that you intended. A "leak" is, well, a leak. Like a faucet. A "leek" is a vegetable. Not fatal to a fic in and of itself, but they really make a reader stop and ask themselves: "Did I really just read what I thought I did?" Could use a cleanup. |
| The Lord Marbury chapter 8 . 7/13/2009 I don't know what tto think because I've always gotten the feeling that weapons and shields in the stargate universe was j more powerful than the ones in the star trek universe. Especially when you compare the shields. Good work though. |
| ljbrown1 chapter 19 . 1/31/2009 Sorry for your loss, so long ago... Lance |
