It's so sad...but mostly true, you know? It reminds me a little of Kili's expression in the scene when Thorin yells at Fili and Kili for joking about orcs. Great writing.

while this is awesome on it's own, i wish you'd write more about it. a next chapter or a sequel. just, something?

awww, i loved this story its cute, and real (if you get what i mean),

I didn't like this story, sorry. Because I know Thorin loves both Kili and Fili.

This was really sad...but I think Thorin does have this kind of side to him too, although I never pictured it as being this extreme. But this was really well written, nearly made me cry, which is the mark that a story has a lot of feels in it. Loved it!

So sad! But I like that take on things. It seems so very Thorin.

It was a good story, very pleasant to read. Thank you for publishing it.

I liked the fic

Great story. Kili and Thorin must feel hurt.

I believe this. And that is hard for writers to make me believe it. But I like this. It's so believeable that Kili would be neglected by Thorin. Although we know he wouldn't - it's believeable. Well done!