Very intriguing premise and execution. I was confused about the italicized passages at first, but after the lapses of memory were explained I got it. It totally sucks for Iruka that he had his memories sealed without prior knowledge or permission :( I'm kinda not down for that. I'm glad he got to have them back through, and I'm assuming afterwards they'd be forced to increase his clearance rather than continue hiding his memories.

Its was very good ;)

nice

Nice one. I like the intrigue... I got so mad for Iruka during this. Poor guy!

Great story! I like how you were able to make Iruka the missing nin without him actually being one intentionally. All that lovin' was very hot and wonderfully descriptive! :)

Missing nin Iruka, a poor guy.
Nice story.

Nice

awesome story, very well written!

Loved this!

Haha yea it works. A little convenient that all the nights he can't remember were murder nights but pretty good story!

I loved it! As always lol. You have an amazing writing style that Judy flies. Pair that with your chosen plot lines and I just can't resist! Great job!

This is pretty awesome: good mix of humour, drama and romance, and an interesting response to the prompt :) I like your opening, as well as the crime scene bit from Masato's point of view. I was initially slightly confused by what the point to what Iruka writes at the start was, but the mystery behind the flashbacky bits encouraged me to read on. Second all the positives already mentioned in the other reviews. Definitely more than somewhat entertaining :P

Ha! Kakashi you sucker! Never bet against the better judgement of a woman! You'd lose in the end! :D

At first when I was reading the story I was confused in the beginning since there was no real connection between the laspses of memory to the present. But when I read the whole thing that's when the lightbulb came off. So all in all I liked the chapter and Kaka got some in the end right? *wiggles eyebrows and rolls hips*

Good job! Too bad you don't have a lot of reviews.

great))
it was a little bit difficult to drop into the story, but then it became impossible to give it up. 'cause that scene in the storage room is superb

This was awesome! Poor Iruka at the begining, thinking he was going crazy. Super sweet and smexy ending. Love happy endings! I love the fact that you have the pack in here, I love the pups. Also everyone seemed super IC which is always a plus. As always awesome story! XD