Great story... loved the lemon :3

Well, it's a good one-shot, but there's one thing that doesn't really fit into the whole 'imaginary universe' thing they have. I don't think they have TV's or news reporters. I mean they have the lovely folks at Sorcerer's Weekly-like Jason-and that Chapati Lola guy, but no news people. Or DVD players or whatever for that part. I guess they could use Lacrima for their viewing pleasure, you know since they had it at the GMG (Grand Magic Games for those who either don't know or forgot).
Not trying to harp, still a good NaLu one-shot, just a little 'real world modernization' which doesn't really work.
-Always,
FireHanyou14-

love it

I honestly don't normally write reviews because I don't really know what to say but honestly Igneel's explanation was positively brilliant. I almost wish this wasn't a one shot, I could definitely get behind reading more content.

I just love lemons :)

itz gud considerin dat itz ur first story/smut...the only problems were that u need to re-check ur spellin and grammar,try to add a lil more details,an dont rush...itz ok, take ur time(it had this one shot taht took meh like 2 dayz 2 read it waz real long an ah loved it)dont worry about it bein to long worry bout it bein too short...other than dat overall it waz quite well produced;the structure of it,when each part may come in/along,the P. etc.

so urm yh ill give yuh ah 6/10...for now ...it waz vey well dun keep up the gud work an thank u for ur time OwO)

You make no sense what so ever

awwwwwww I loved it!

so cute! I loved it!XD (ewe) *cough-should totally make one like this on soul eater-cough* lol

Come on we want more

omg that was totally cute !

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Love it!

sweet! n i'm not perverted

That was pretty good, you should write more stories like this!