Give me other characters with one small change you'd like me to make, and I'll write one for that character as well.

You did a good Job please make a sequel it seems a waste to end like this

So sad, but so sweet.

T.T *sniff* It's so sad and yet so sweet! You brought life to this and created a world where Sasuke has a heart.
I liked the part about the sharingan, it was a nice touch.
The only thing that seemed improbable was the storage, but I can't fault you much on that, since it's such a tiny piece of the story.
When Itachi started his monologue, I half expected Sasuke to vow revenge on the Hokage, but you manuevered the dialogue well, to lead away from that result.
You did an excellent job. Thank you so much for writing and for posting!