This. Is. HILARIOUS!

Grimsley you're such a prick xD

I have to admit, when I first started reading this I didn't expect too much. Then I was floored. This story was hot, smart, and hilarious. Keep it up, because you're a damn good writer.

The last part xD
You go Shauntie :3

These two, the way you write them, just have the most ridiculous and amazing chemistry - if you can call it that sometimes. I shipped them before, but after following all the things you've written for them, this is one of my best-kept OTPs now. Grimsley is appropriately a smarmy little asshole with too much ego and trashy vampire-novel sex appeal, and Shauntal is the result of a teenage nerd given about ten years, a sex drive, and a little more maturity who never quite lost the nerd.

I was actually thrilled by the ending, not gonna lie. What a beautiful glimpse into moments where Grimsley is just so much of an ass that it goes from sexy to unsexy. And, I admit, I'm rather excited to see what happens between them after this little incident. B)

I like how your version of Grimsley almost always makes me laugh. (In general, your fics made me like many characters who I barely cared for before. I think it means youre doing very great job with writing).

Really good story. I don't really have many words for it, other than "Bravo," or "Well written." I really enjoyed reading it, feeling the occasional "butterflies in the stomach" feeling with a slight blush as I read through the italicized sex scene between Skyla and Black. It seemed pretty well thought through, too. I hope you write more stories similar to this one!