Wish that you could finish this story

I like it alot

this was a good chapter as well. Wow they are going to be in awesome shape when they are done with school huh.

yes I do hope that Bella will find that witch and also get all the help she needs right. Also she should try to find out why Heidi was with Carlisle, Alice and Edward right,to see what they are up too and what not.

this was a good chapter as well. Wow I wonder what Bella has thought is true. I hope not. I also hope that Bella gets her memory back to remember who she is and who her family is right. Then get even with the Cullen's

this was a good firstchapter. Wow Bella is not a whole human, and the Cullen's didn't know about this, cool. I do hope that Bella gets what she deserves right, and that isn't the Cullens back into her life right, especially when they all left her.

I must admit the summary is very vague and causes many expectations. I think that your chapters are very well written but lack some much needed detailing. A lot of small detailing could make or break the story with the direction you are leading. I do love the plot but it may be just a little too complex. I hope you can find a way to make it work.

Keep the story coming . It is really good. I want to know what happens next

i love this story

i love this story its so cool

Interesting start and twist on new moon

I say if you cant finish give it to someone to let them finish it cause I like it so much.

Please keep going I love it

Please dont stop I love this story!

I love this story...I wanna see how it ends...please don't give uop, continue