Reviews for Out of the Dark & Into The Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What did we learn? She can play just fine but can't take a serious fight hand to hand. Not to mention her emotions and caring behavior is flat and kinda boring. Feel anger or something other then "oh i hope he is ok" because im a saint and dont have negative feelings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure if i like that she is ok with random dude walking into her life demanding she do this and that and she just does it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant hear the word Daddy without cringing cause i keep hearing Zaddy lololololol and she sounds childish when she says mommy or daddy cause like you grown and it sounds like she 6 or something i don't even call my parents mommy and daddy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this story a lot please update. |
![]() ![]() Good story can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I accidentally put my longer review on your first chapter. So I hope you see it. But love the story update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww they’re getting married! Update again soon! Also I don’t know your plans but I really hope Jacob doesn’t imprint on Edward and Bella’s baby I always thought that was weird and odd. Maybe if their baby is a boy and Is Bree’s mate! |
![]() ![]() Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd this on Wattpad |
![]() ![]() ![]() a great chapter :))))))))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() a great chapter :)))))))))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter :))))))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this one a lot. It was a good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot.m it's really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying this so far. It is really good. I love it. |