whYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

YOU SUCK YOU DID GIVE ME FALSE HOPE WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

surprisingly, I didn't cry. I saw it comin like a mile away .-. still, pretty good, though.

No mi gosh. He actually, why? I honestly read this cuz I stumbled upon a fanfic of yours based on this so I'm just crying. Noooo, Jackie!

I cried a little. (Not a little.) It was really good though.

This was amazingly wrote! Very sad and you made me cry because of your trickery T-T

i didn't cry instead i cept a strait face i saw this coming him committing suicide keep working you'll get good

Well that was...how do I put it? Erm sad, depressing, I'm sat here almost in tears. That was sad, unpleasant and aww poor bunny, poor jack x

Keep up the good work! Love it

I hate you D:

Thanks for destroying my heart. Not like I needed it anyways...

NO WHAT NOOOYOUCANT I NEVER CRY NEEEVERR BUT BUT THIS I CABTN NOWHY YOUCANT I THPUGHT HE WAS RUNNING AWASAY NOT FARIR NOT FAIIIIIRRRRRRR ./FUCKING SOBSS OW

Yay! Your plan worked! But now I'm thinking of Percy Jackson because of Hoover Dam. That part was funny, but not as funny when Tyson said 'Yay! Your brain works!' XD

The ending was sad! I thought that Jack was going to actually run away! Good work, by tbe way.

I'm seriously crying. i usually never cry at stuff like this, but the letter and everything, it killed me.

You ripped out my heart strings, definitely. Keep it up!

Oh dear. Jack was talking about Bunny the tutor! OMG! I haven't read River but I swear I planned to read it just yesterday!