This was sweet!

heck yeah you should make this a twoshot

Please make it a 2 shots please ** its a great story . please continue .

I loved the story!
Are there more like this one or a sequel?
really soon!
;-)

Aww... this was SO CUTE! :D

"It's late. Very late. I have to report to wake up at 6 tomorrow to get ready."

Okay, so numbers should be spelled out. Change "6" to "six".

"After a second, she decided it was a no-brainer, the hall was what was making her uneasy."

This here is a comma splice, which is when you connect two independent clauses with a comma. So change the comma to a period and make the two clauses into two sentences.

"May smiled slightly, 'Let's head over to that bench we saw on the lakeside, okay? I want to count the Magicarp and Feebas.'"

You spelled Magikarp incorrectly in this sentence.

"As the almost came to the bench, a Masquerain flew up to May's Beautifly."

I think you meant "As she almost came to the bench,..."

By the way, you also spelled Solidad incorrectly.

That was so romantic, how they were near the moon and all at such a romantic place! :D At first I was planning on bashing you about how I felt like it was a tad bit rushed, but my heart just totally melted at the adorableness of this one-shot. :) I like all the little romantic actions between the two. I would've liked to see more detail, but still, you did a great job! :D

You should totally make this a two-shot! It's okay if you don't though. Ooh, and I should definitely check out Tangled soon! :D

PLEASE MAKE A TWO-SHOT!
I absolutely loved this! :D

I say add their battle and after party, as always your stories make me yearn for more!

YES YES MAAKE A TWO SHOT I WANT TO SEE THE BATTLE AND PARTAYYYYYY

Been a while since I've read a contestshipping fic, loved it!

Dawww! If I somehow find a way into the Pokemon world I'm making this happen! Seriously, why can't my life be an anime?! It'd be super cute, cheesy, and interesting! Anyway, since I don't really feel like starting our hundredth conversation you can reply to this through our one PM or not at all. Anyway, great job and see you whenever you post a story next! Or I guess PM next.

You know you've read too many of these when you can predict lines and get them right on your first read though.
May: what are you doing out so late.
Me: Well I could ask you the same question.
Drew: I could ask you the same question.
Me: Slams head against keyboard.
The story was great but so is all your stuff.

That was soo cute

MAKE. IT. A. TWOSHOT. HOLY CRAP... I ABSOLUTELY ADORED THIS. PLEASE UODATE ASAP!

This was really cute :) really sweet too. Super sweet and cutesy and filled with awe moments! I loved it :)) definitely a fave and idk if this should be a two-shot I feel like its perfect just the way it ended but I am curious for the after party. Lol. Idk do whatever hits your heart twoshot or is this a oneshot?

This is wonderful!
Can it be a two-shot?