This is good. Your beta needs to double check the proofreading a little better, but I am enjoying it. Is Eva an identical twin? Or is she more like a Victoria Justice look-a-like.

More, more, more! I loved this! Please do season 2!

I really love this book! Will you plz update soon! Can't wait to read more! It has just gotten good!

A lot of spelling errors and its only the first chapter. A little disappointing.

When are you going to update some outfits?

Wrie more season' it is good . I like it.

Hello.
I've gone through your story, and found a lot of grammatical, punctuation and spell errors. I think you're going with a sequel now? You should probably edit this out.
About the plot, I know this is Fanfiction and you can write almost anything here, but I can't help being judgemental about how you have only injected your OCs into the exact story of the season one. There is no change in the story. The twins phenomenon only undoes the complicated relationships and by far, one of the most interesting things of the vampire diaries. I'm not against your OCs or anything, but they felt too unnatural. You should focus on how to make the reader seem like THIS is actually happening. I don't know why, but the story seemed really shallow and superficial. As if you just copied down what actually happened canon, and inserted in Eva and Danielle's dialogues. Also, there's this description thing: try to detail your descriptions, dialogues, and scenarios. It may seem a little more work, but it will put a good impression on the reader, and make them intrigued and feel like they are in the story. I read the first chapter with focus and care, but as i went on, lack of description and detailing, lack of good vocabulary really put me out of my mood.
I hope I'm being constructive and not hurting feelings or anything. I could have just read it, frown and leave, but I wanted to leave a little bit of criticism and advice.
I'm an avid reader, I've read some pretty great things so I can't help compare. This was the first TVD fic I read and I was a little disappointed. I hope you prosper though. Or maybe this story is old and your writings are pretty amazing now...I dunno. I didn't check the publish date. The summary caught me.
So yeah. I'm not a great writer myself, but I have a standard of reading material. Hope I didn't offend you.
And I'm not gonna be anonymous like a scaredy-cat lol. That is my username above. Only I'm lazy...JK.
Happy Writing.

U r spelling cheek check

Are the twins fraternal or identical?

Loving it! Please update!

There are several grammatical errors in your first dozen chapters or so, and sentences that don't make sense. You might want to review and edit those, to make your story more eloquent.

loved is each chapter going to completely follow the show

you should do a sequal to this from were the originals come in to it i think it would be really good especially if tatia had a twin too ! please think about it ! i would love to read a sequal

more chapter please also write more about Damon and Eva and their love for each other too also write about Eva finding out that Damon slept with Danielle so maybe because Eva is feeling hurt and angry and heartbroken and betrayed with Damon should absolutely get back at yes and getting even too with Damon for sleeping with Danielle maybe by flirting and kissing Tyler affectionately in front of Damon at the Mayor Lockwood's funeral because Eva truly hoped that Damon loved her and not Eva's lying and evil and slutty and manipulative whore of a doppelganger also Danielle is a evil bitch who ruined truly everything for Damon and Eva and their love for each other too but I still have hope for Damon and Eva to get together also when Damon and Eva final admit their love for each other maybe Damon and Eva should become intimate and consummate their relationship in Damon and Eva's night of passion and intimacy also throw in a little smut when Damon and Eva makeup with each other too can't wait for more chapter too

Great chapter! In the sequel is Klaus going to fall in love with Eva, but it takes a while for Eva to fall in love with Klaus I hope so because I always think that Klaus needs a girl to fall in love with and that with love him back.