Wonderful. I love this. So sweet seeing things from Jane's perspective, even the little glimpse of L/D in the hallway.

I can't believe you're a non-native speaker; this was beautifully written! Please write more when you get a chance :)

Nice!

That's really sweet! Those two really should be friends, especially given that she's the only Bennet who liked him for a long time. And I like the idea of him coming to visit her to apologize. He really should. :)

Aw, this is brilliant. Very sweet, and very enjoyable to read.

:) That was wonderful. You had me at the first point - wait, point 1. at the top, not point 1. at the bottom, but that was super cute, too - and the whole thing was lovely. Especially playing peek-a-boo with a toddler for four hours. In our house it's Candy Land. Endless games of Candy Land ... Well done. Thank you!

It absolutely HAS to be one of the best Jane and Darcy friendship stories I've ever read. There are only a few of them out there, but this one definitely takes the metaphorical cake... Keep up the great work! Looking fwd to more from you :)

this story just made me so happy. thank you. i love the end so much