Hi! I like the idea, but the story itself is full of plot holes and things that don't make sense. Besides the spelling and grammar mistakes which I recommend using spell check to avoid you have many plot holes. 1 why is Buu still alive and Goku and the gang are doing nothing about it? 2 how is Babidi still alive with Super Buu? He died by the hands of fat Buu before he even split into good and evil Buu. Also since when could they make his power level 0? Actually magic can affect those stronger than the user so that's ok. 3 with a power level of 0 I don't think Goketa would be able to even walk.

I really want you to continue and like what you're doing so don't take this in a mean way. If you do decide to continue on this please take what I've said into consideration!

It s interesting but there arent enough explanations and descriptions

did it really work it seemed like she/he still hade memories

sorry if you dislike, Vegeta and Bulma are married!

I can't believe it, it got even worse...more problems here.

1)So wait, Goketa just happened? No way to show how Babidi transformed him into a girl? Sorry, but that can't fly, you have to explain how something important like this happened.
2)How did Goketa meet Vegeta? Again, you ignore important details like that, why?
3)I thought Buu and Babidi were still alive, how did they end up in HFIL?
4)Length. I know you said this was short, but this is beyond short. This is a single paragraph, but in reality, one sentence and dialogue.

I know I sound like a broken record, but I'm sincerely trying to help. Because this is very interesting, I want to read on, but these plot holes and grammar issues prevent me. PM me if you want me to elaborate on this.

Okay, I have a lot of problems here, even though this is only chapter 1, so maybe they get explained later:

1) The parenthesis- Put that in an Author's note, don't put it in the actual chapter, ruins the flow pretty badly
2)OOC- Goku wouldn't make breakfast if Chi-Chi was alive, he loves her cooking so much he was willing to learn how to drive in the anime to be able to eat it; Gohan wouldn't tune Chi-Chi out, he would sigh or something like that.
3)Buu and Babidi- One, its Babidi, not Bobbidi. Two, how did Buu become Super Buu if he didn't befriend Mr. Satan, he was the whole reason he released the Skinny Buu. Three, Super Buu is definitely strong enough to handle Goku, he wouldn't have to worry about losing and wouldn't have to suggest turning Goku into a girl. Four, neither Buu nor Babidi should be able to make Goku lose his memories and give him a female personality just like that, nothing in canon suggests Babidi or Buu can do this.

All in all, interesting concept, but it falls because of plot holes, grammar, spelling, and spacing. Chapter 1 does at least, maybe you did change it in chapter 2, I'll read it and see.

its cool

Please make the chapters longer and can you explain how Goketa meet Vegeta?Also what was everyones reaction to meeting her?

Its alright I guess...