SO MUCH POTENTIAL FOR EVENTUAL KAISAKI CARRY ON

It was awesome! :)

The way Kai cares for Misaki is so... Different. He cares, without really showing it. I don't sense any OOC at all here, great job! My favorite part was:
"I just hope she feels better soon,"
"For Aichi's sake?"

Nice one!

This is one of the few perfectly written fanfics in the achieve. The interaction between all the characters were pretty solid and realistic. Especially Misaki and Kai. I like how he cared for her in his own way, and the constant question on whether or not it was because of Achi. The plot is realistic and very well done. Despite Misaki's friendship problems it showed how much support she had from Kai and Miwa too. Thank you for such a great read. This fanfic made my time browsing through bad fanfiction seem worthwhile. I hope you consider writing more for this small fandom, it will keep the quality high and the fans happy. Good day and best of luck!

Nice :D

great!

I like the fact that in this story, all 3 of them are somehow really friendly (in a way). I especially love that Kai seems to show he cares for Misaki (my fav parts). I just see what you did there though. The whole insinuation of how Kai always thinks about Aichi and I kinda feel that it was a little too much. Well, nice one shot though.

its good, keep writing

Wow, it's like the first story with decent Misaki and Kai interaction.

Then again, I would expect no less of you.

Interesting how you put Miwa inbetween them, with how unsure Kai is of himself. It's a nice introspective piece this way :3