I bet reaver had something to do with it. And maybe killed Priscilla or something. Ebony may feel guilty she never made up with her parents. Will she and Logan will reconcile because of this. Hope you update soon!

The true story hasn't even begun yet...since the deal between The Old Hero King and Reaver is null and void.

update soon

continued? pleeease

Oh look the bully is back again. Lol! Some people are so immature. Make like Elsa and "Let it goooo..."

This story is good, for a fanfic. And if you are honestly obessing over this YEARS after it was published, then you may need to talk to a professional about that. Quit it with the teenager crap and act your age, not your shoe size. :)

Any chance of a new chapter soon?

Really...

This chapter is impossible to get through.

I think it's all one paragraph. The dialogue lines are all clumped in the same paragraph it's so confusing seeing who's speaking.

Each time you have someone speaking, they get their own paragraph. It's a huge grammar no no to have two speakers on the same line. Saw some of your responses to an angry reviewer, calling them out on grammar.

Have you read your 1st chapter? Something, something, pots and kettles and such...

I am really enjoying this, and I really hope you continue it soon. I love the way you portray Reaver as well as the Princess. Can't wait to read what happens next!

please please update this fic!

Poor ebony. Great chapter. Hope you update soon!

Hope you update soon! I really love this story!

Hope you update soon! I really want to know what happens next!

Ok...this is really hard for me to write because this truly is my favorite Fable fanfiction. But...it just seems like Reaver and Ebony are going around in circles. I am hoping you have something exciting and captivating planned. This story started out so well, I don't want to see it fizzle out like so many other fics I see.

Please update, like NOW! 3

Please write more soon, I'm dying from the wait! :)