OMG! That was amazing! This is very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter ! :) 3

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This is a great story and also great chapters too! I love them and like them, will Peter and Wendy get married in the end? Sorry, I couldn't help but ask, I like happy endings, I know it wired to say

When will u write the next chapter? And please continue its a great story!

An amazingly nice chapter update!

wow lovely chapter!

Wow, you have no idea how happy this update made me . :D
I was pleasantly surprised :) , I read your author's note and understood your reasons .. so I was not expecting an update ...
Thank you , I am glad you have found it in you to write , I will be here reading and supporting your writing from the background ( if you want ) .
Sorry I don't really review your story, but just know that I always read every single word.
It's been a while :) so I better go re-read a bit .
Goodbye for now and have a nice day (if you can /want to ! )

Love the story and the modern day twist on the characters,
Wendy should definitely end up with White Cub

ohhh... i thought you finally updated.. but no worries... whatever you see fit for your story

That last bit's from Narnia!
XXX

This is a good twist to the movie. I like it. Please continue it! :)
-Bladewolf2038

please continue!

i dont like white cub...:'( even though he is so understanding to wendy

I think she should be with white cub! He is so much better for her the Peter the forgetful. Please update the next chapter soon!

White cub