Hey! Uhmmm... are you going to abandon it? Sorry for the question but I have read more than enough Negitoro fan fiction that never did have an ending. So yeah... I don't want to be frustrated and thus the question there.

Anyway, the paragraphs are way too long although the how the story progressed is nice though! A reader like me would have no trouble knowing what exactly is happening however the long paragraphs are way too long that I decided to skip one or two hahaha sorry about that.

Anyway, this story has real potential like Luka is a big mystery. What did she did to the other kingdoms to make her into a wanted criminal? Who is the girl she dreamt about? Why is she doing what she is doing? What is her purpose? And more of these annoying questions in my head.

Same with Miku why is she comfortable with the necklace on her neck like some kind of familiarity in it? Is she connected to the girl Luka had dreamt about? Or is she the same girl? If so how did that happen? They met before? And etc. Etc.

I could blubber all of it but I am afraid I am too lazy to so hahaha

I like this story but if you don't have any passion in it (that is if you really don't) then I guess it's okay... Although I am gonna be sad not knowing all the answers to those questions.

Sigh
Anyway. Thanks for the Negitoro!

Please continue this story! It is very well written and the plot is really captivating and suspenseful. I wanna know what happens next! You ended it in a cliffhanger :{ Pweeeeease?! :c

Please continue this! I love the story so far and I need to know what'll happen next!

PLEASE update soon!

Please update! I so damn like this!

Her book..

wow i actually cry in the 4 and 5 chapter TwT
i love this story very much...
its very awesome of you to describe about the feeling of the character and the surrounding :D (i envy of you on that o.o)
i'm sure if you take english literature class, you'll got A LOL xD
oh i can't wait the next chapter...
dum dum dum.. owo

Woaaaah! Super Cute Luka blushinggg, omg. I squeeed. Anyway. Great chapter as always. It feels like a RPG game, and I love RPG game, Luka the overused main character, a swordsman/woman, Miku, again an overused character, wizard?/support, and Gumi, a tech genius, I think so.. XD

and I LOVE IT! Ohohohohoho. Since you ask for an opinion about those stories you have in mind, I suggest that if you want to, add only a new one, because you might leave some stories, and may not be able to continue them, or become lazy to continue it, but I'd rather have you focused on this story first, and don't start a new one yet, or published a new one. I have a feeling it will be hard.

hmmm...

Poor Miku, I feel bad for her. And yeah, I think it was a good idea to focus this chapter on Miku; she deserved some spotlight!
As for Luka... She is selfish but in the end she cares and feels guilty for it. That's good.
Hope those two make up soon.

Updaaate! Your characters are pretty amazing. Also the way you describe them. This chapter is great!

I do hope some amazing fighting scenes in the future chapters, and fluff, too. XD

I read all negitoro, but i especially like this one :) update :D

I saw your story before, but this is the first time I checked it out. I was thinking that this may not be that good, but it's awesome. I hope to read more. Are you writing something for Valentines?

O-O how could you! *feigns exasperation*poor Luka n Miku! Make sure they make up

Mmm.. Well this getting good. Keep up with update