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Andreina Cummings chapter 6 . 7/27/2019 I hope you continue writing this story because it is a really great story |
Andreina Cummings chapter 5 . 7/27/2019 Great story please continue writing it soon |
Andreina Cummings chapter 3 . 7/27/2019 Great story so far |
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Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2014 A great and very unique story it is a shame that you probably won't continue this |
Happyfish chapter 6 . 4/22/2014 This is interesting and I would like to see more... however this story makes me feel a bit sad. |
waldo071 chapter 6 . 11/10/2013 UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE DAMMIT..This is good. |
Tied Up By chapter 6 . 3/8/2013 Maybe you should get a proofreader, but otherwise I like this story. |
Zatheko chapter 6 . 3/7/2013 I'm liking this story, look forward to more! |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 6 . 3/7/2013 Dang, that got serious! |
Tied Up By chapter 5 . 2/22/2013 Pretty good so far, I like the pacing, but the ending was a little awkward for some of these chapters. Maybe work on that? |
LadyCalus chapter 5 . 2/22/2013 Not a bad story, slow going, but not bad so far :D |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 5 . 2/21/2013 Okay? Me confused by the EXTRA crazy they all on, please tone down the nutty next chapter:) |
Anonymous chapter 5 . 2/21/2013 Some of the transitions between scenes were rough, but overall this is a really funny and enjoyable chapter. |
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 2/17/2013 Looks promising:) |