Lame

why you don't write more chapter? the story is great and really interesting.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Well I know you are likely done writing this fic but if Naruto has any kind of trouble with Smoker I guess he's a joke compared to the admirals...

Naruto should not be using red chakra Kurama mode... Naruto could stay in Sage mode for DAYS! Especially if he's just using taijutsu. I am fine with Sage mode being needed to hurt Logias though.

Canon Naruto is just GOD tier compared to anything we know of in OP. And I love One Piece.

In all fairness, I can't understand how Luffy would have beat Buggy in their first meeting? Buggy has more years of experience then Luffy has been alive, he spent YEARS in the new world... He should have schooled Luffy before throwing his corpse into the ocean.

Don't get me wrong I love Luffy and that he won, but if we look at this as two pirates of no real merit or name fighting each other with the same stats? Who do we really think would have won?

He could have just ordered her to stand down... He is her Hokage after all...

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This is a pretty damn good fic, too bad it's dead.

Great...so you had her leave out the tenryuubito from her story to Naruto. That sucks.

OH HELL YES! And in the ass again, lolz! Btw, Happy 275th Review! Please upload chapter 20 soon.

Alright, cool.

Darn. I really liked having Luffy & Co. travelling with Naruto's group. Oh well.

Yes! Love it, especially the action and the moment between Naruto and Lisanna.

Love that you put the Strawhat Crew on Naruto's ship.

Love this! And that ending! XD