Emmett was the first to speak. (Don't, no one speak... Ever). "Actually she sucked both me and Edward off the day we left."( Please stop,)
Right there is where I lost it and just couldn't stop laughing

Was that fun or what I mean I had you review your own story
Which you did amazingly well by the way mind you You always do
As always you rock
Brilliant thank you

Omg these are funny. U need to do others from like jazz, emmett, rose, jake, mmmmm paul, sam, seth, Jared, quil, embry, leah, collin and brady's reviews. Heck even charlie, sue, Rachel, kim, emily and clairs reviews.

lol...on Victoria!
now l wanna read that story...it seems weird but in a good way.

this was fun!
well done :)

I'd like to invite Edward over...this was so hot!

You rocked esme as a reviewer she totally made that funny instead of sexy but that's ok
awesome you are brilliant
A pleasure thank you

i decided to read this story backwards
and yes cute.
i have young cousins, and yeah they out-cute me anyday ( i i thought i was pretty hot, lol)
its a good dose of reality to realise you have been out cuted by a 3 yr old

of all your stories, i just picked a chapter at random, due to the type of story.
your story idea seems like fun
i enjoyed this and it made me smile

Glad you liked reading it I am still enjoying too
Loved the way you did this
Excellent thanks

OK that was fun
Brilliant thanks

Thanks for working on the list

I loved it! So funny! Thank you!

Nice one
Brilliant thanks

This is funny!
Could you have Edward review one of my stories called My New Family? That would be cool!
Another suggestion is a story called A Lullaby Of My Own by Jezzyem, that's my absolute favorite fanfic.

That was so bloody funny I could see that happening
Brilliant thanks

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