This was a very well written story. I love it.

Where it says kise is running down the stairs with his arm flapping, I literally pictured him as a yellow inflatable arm flailing tube man running down stairs twords a very concerned kuroko

This chapter was confusing... I kept confusing who was playing who.

*faints*

Good story I loved reading it and I like stories where there will be at the end something like what you did with the time skip...even if I find it sad that they drifted apart.

Regards,
Lunary

... diiiiiiissssssssssaaaaapppppoooooiiiiinnnnnnttttteeeeedddddd

I really love this story!

Hmm, I loved this story for the most part, but I'm sort of unsatisfied with the last chapter. Akashi suddenly leaves and comes back eight years later... Seems a little unresolved here. I wanted to see more interaction in the end, and all that, but for the most part, this was a good story.

I'm liking the fic so far, but stop using Japanglish sentences, please.

This story is indeed passionate but i dont seem to get what exactly happened with Akashi. Why did he suddenly leave? What caused the change of attitude? I meam what was his condition? Everything was really interesting but please do answer my questions
-Rio

This was a outstanding story! The emotion in this was wonderful, the way you put everyone's emotions into words is amazing for the lack of better words. I immensely enjoyed this.

NOOOOO! What happened after the match? I WANT FLUFFINESS!

Note that you have an underscore (_) in "letting _ slip". I assume you mean Takao's mark, and didn't put the name in.

ohhh now that I read the bottom I understand my first thought was 'but I thought kuroko couldn't shoot a ball to save his life?' now its all clear

interesting. so... emotional.