Says four chapters it pushing it *adds six*

Aubrey is the one that needs to grow up

Honestly, This is a great chapter! I've seen Beca sad but not like this. Great Work!

I must say, this is already a great read for me. I like the beginnings of the story, but a thing that is of utmost importance to me that so many writers on here seem to overlook is proper grammar. I'm actually going to try to stretch this one out and enjoy it!

This is kinda hard to read without the double quotation marks around their speech... it makes it difficult for me to differentiate between thought and dialogue.

Hi ) I am a French girl so my English is not very good and I'm sorry for that in advance. This story was very well written, very touching and this is mainly due to the writing (very good style!) But also to the two characters who are interesting and profound. It is difficult to find a story that suits us well, and even if it has frustrated me at times, it was a "good frustration" (?), because a good story is not necessarily an easy story (as in life, I guess). Anyway I can not wait to see what happens next! Congratulations for this beautiful story and these brilliant characters !

That was great ! I read it in 24hours, couldn't stop. Thx for not rushing their relationship, that made everything more realistic. Oh and I love how well you developped their personnality ! Great job ! Hope you had a good time in France !

Dude. This was awesome.

This fic is unlike anything I've ever read. I keep coming back to it. The way that you explain Beca's anxiety and the way you have them work through it together, with all the stumbles and mistakes that would be true of any relationship, well I really do believe it's something special. It's not sugar coated. It's not all sunshine and rainbows. It's realistic and deep and meaningful. I just want to thank you for sharing this. This is truly one of the more special, well thought out, fics out there.

Yum yum yum
I'm rereading this again and I'm still laughing

Really interesting story. Thank you, Hope.

Thanks so much for writing this story. As someone who also has trouble with physical contact and showing affection, this was a really nice thing to read.

I loved this chapter actually, I think you were too hard on yourself! The Facebook stuff was hilarious and the movie scene well done.

I loves how slow this burn was, I usually like the part of them getting together more than the actual relationship, so this was right up my alley.
And I feel like I should let you know that I liked the 'dramatic showdown' at the end, even if it might be controversial. It does kind of make sense for becas character. I wish this would go on longer because there is still so much more to come and we all know there's going to be a lot of struggle on beca's part, but I hope to find some in the further scenes you hinted at. So yeah, good job, I enjoyed it!

This is literally amazing. Are you trying to write a version of Beca with Asperger's? Because if you are, it's the best representation I've ever read