I love how you had the Nimueh trap Merlin in a tree, like in the legend. This was a great chapter.

I'm sorry for all you had to go through those last couple years. Hope you're doing better now.

You are an incredible writer. I can say that truthfully because I should know. I also know how hard it is to write when suffering from depression. I went through some... trying times. I just want to say, you inspire me. I hope you read this. Never stop writing. I mean it.

I have read your newer modified version of this story with Morgana but regardless I must say I am jealous of your ability to write really sad/ depressing literature

You could have left your story as it was. I have read your rewrite and found I could just skim the first four chapters of this old one as they seem so similar to me. But I see you must do what you must. I am looking forward to further updates.

Your story is so creative. Legend has it that Nimeuh or was it Morgana trapped Merlin in a tree but he was an old man when it happened. So this is a very creative twist. Especially to have Bartholomew take human form.

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why do they trust what they were shown when previously they thought her to be insane

I loved this story, thanks for sharing it with us

Great fic! Heading over to the new fic now xx

Ariel liking them based on how they treat Merlin is hilarious xD

I see my comment yesterday was pointless as you are rewriting! I am really looking forward to that, it's a wonderful story and I love the plot and the way you've portrayed all the characfers, I'll jump on your profil now and follow your other story ;)

Hi! I love this so far, the way you've portrayed all the characters! It's great and I can't wait to read more,
Uh I hope you don't mind me correcting some spelling/ grammar mistakes? In the last couple of paragraphs you kept called Hunith "to young"? It's "too" young, in that sense,
Thank you for writing! I'm reading on straight away!

I've always loved this story. I'll always reread it as long as it's here. I believe in your writing and I'm excited to see your new treatment of the ideas in this story. Thanks for revisiting it!

Thanks for the update on things. I look forward to the new story.

Im just happy you decided to not abandon this story, good luck with the rewriting im sure itll somehow manage even better this time around! (ε )