This is adorable.
I adore this.
UPdate soon, if you would.

I love this story! But, I think your chapters should be longer.

I'm really enjoying this story. Please keep updating it :)

Great chapter yey Rose is going with the Doctor and the talk of bananas was great and the end run it was perfect

Haha finally! It always made mad tht he NEVER finished that sentence even when he got the second chance to

Ah I love it! I live ten/Rose stories and this chapter was so adorable (strangely that's the word I use the most when describing ten and rose) pleas update as soon as you can!

This is a cute story. Great first four chapters. Can't wait for the next!

When I read the name, "John", I got confused and more so when you had rose mention him being part time-lord, then I remembered that's the alias the Doctor likes to use. John Smith. Anyway, I liked how you explained Rose not aging. Good writing there. I can't wait to read more!

Yey they are together again and he's finally told rose he loves her

I liked that, I read so much stuff like this where she becomes all dark because of their deaths and stuff, but nothing really like this. I like it.

I just have to say this, because it was fantastic, but right when I dinished reading this chapter, I got a message and my phone went, 'Bad Wolf,' just thought that was a one in a life time thing. Anyways, update soon.

Update soon.

Ah I love 10 and Rose stories! Update soon :)

This is looking brilliant so far! The plot is rather creative. A few grammar stuff going on, but it doesn't bother me, haha! This is a great start, I'm looking forward to your future updates!

Great chapter of corse the tardis approved ten is back and the control room to and now there in pete's world but from your info 80 years is Rose a time lady now or immortal can't wait to find out