wait, so a whole shit load of men women and children are being killed simply bc bela wants to runaway from the fact that she's in love with hawke? brutal.

i really dont see how your stories arent more popular

Okay so now I've got to go and play the game again with this fantastic piece of work running around in my head. I'm supposed to be writing and you're not helping. But it's okay cause you've only got another nine stories for me to read. I hate you, but I love you.

"Take it down a peg, only cats can hear you now." ROFL that was an awesome line.

WOW! Not even half way and this story has not let me down on any chapters. :) I'm happy to find out that Isabella did not stay away for too long.

I'm loving this story as each chapter is read. And SOOOOO happy that I'm not even half way yet. And it's nice that I do not have to know too much of the game to enjoy this. But I do need to thank the Wikipedia page for Dragon Age :P

DAMN! These last few chapters were incredible. The awkward dinner party, and the adventure to find Hawk's mother.

I did spoil the death of Leana by googling "White Lilly". But still it was a fun read as I did not get that far in the game.

"Suck the nails out of a hardwood floor." WOW, that is a new one I have to remember. :P

Nice to see Leandra warming up to Hawke. And so glad to see the innuendos are still flying back and forth between Bela and Hawke. :)

"After all, the pirate had a talent for sticking fingers into holes." ... ROFL. You and I are definitely on the same perv minded level. :P

"Do your thing, Hawke!" Varric called, "We'll draw its attention, you be the hero".
That line reminds me of Garrius from Mass Effect during the apartment party. When Garrius says that being with Shepard is a lot of running around, getting shot at, and a few buttons to push. But he/she usually does that. :P

Sex on a pile of gold... epic!

Great ending for this chapter. Since I haven't gotten very far in the game, it's exciting to see where this story goes.

Nine chapters read so far and loving every bit of the story. The innuendos between Hawke and Isabela are fun and sounds like my kind of people to hang around with. :P The battle scenes are nicely written and easy to follow along as to what is going on.

I can see keeping Aveline out of my adventure party. :P Love the innuendo talk and the story line is coming along very nicely.

UGH! You got me hooked on another fanfic story. :P I've read the first three chapters so far and loving every bit of it. You write the characters exactly as they sound in game. Plus, I only so far in the game (right after you pick up Isabela) that I do not know much about the story-line. But so far it seems like most of the story takes place after missions and other in-game scenarios. And thank The Maker that Dragon Age Wiki exists. :P

Love the Lord of the Rings reference. I do think Leandra was too unfair to Hawke as well

I'll continue reading this, it had a compelling start

I wan't to continue reading, but this story is simply taking things too slow and Hawke is simply too unlikably and too much of a woobie for it to be enjoyable.

The humor category I feel is sorely lacking.

You're a good writer despite some grammatical mistakes, but your skill at pacing is sadly lacking. This story follows the game too closely and stretches it out for far too long.

Haha! I couldnt help myself but start reading it all again! And there are a few spelling errors through out the story(nothing that will halt the reading so no worries) and during my second reading i found one word that accidently became another word,which makes the
Whole sentence hilarious!

Its when Hawke goes to the hanged man to get wasted (what other reasons are there ;D ) after Leandra died.

"Suddenly Hawke heard a man's voice behind her.

-"Well, hey there sweat thing! Fancy a drink?"-(do you see it?)

Lana ignored the voice and continued daydreaming, finishing the remains of her bottle. The man however persisted. He closed in beside her, hovering over her shoulder. Hawke suddenly sensed there was more than one man now."

I'm sweaty and i know it, dun dun dun!

Peas