What a magnificent masterpiece!

I absolutely love this story. Love the detail and passion. Love the Cabbie. Love how it felt that Cat loved Robbie even though she may not have know it. Great.

Great story

Aw this was so sweet. This might sound awkward but this really turned me on. Videos and hard core intercoarse are just not my thing, but this was so sweet cuz I sensed some LOVE not just plain old fucking.

Love this. You write their characterisation perfectly.

Very erotic but also mildly unnerving; because your version of Cat retains her infantile comprehension of the world as she consummates her "relationship" with Robbie. While a lovable imbecile from a wacky sitcom probably wouldn't know about carnal and anatomic matters; this realistic aspect just makes the inequality of their romp a bit disturbing because Rob was essentially seducing an innocent child in the physical guise of consenting lady. I actually like this piece and I don't want to seem like a sententious douche, but I just want to voice my opinion. if you made Cat, for instance, mischievously reveal that her childish, imbecilic nature was a clever facade as she seduced Robbie;; he work would have been more gratifying and a lot less eerie.

I always Wanted Cat and Robie to be together Thay seem to just fit. I like how you worked her Bibble Adiction into the story

I've wanted to read a Cat/Robbie lemon for the longest time and this is probably one of the first. Its funny I barely saw the episode and yet I had no idea it was the finale. I think you did a great job on this, it was really sweet and believable and they both seemed to be really well in character, I could hear their voices in my head and I could literally see the events play out before me. I like that it was sensual and yet nothing real graphic (even though I'm a bit disappointed in that, it works because they don't need smut). Like I said I think you did a bang up job portraying them and how they might lose their virginity to each other. I'm not quite sure if Cat would be that oblivious to sexual interaction but its your story. It was very sweet to read, and I think the story was just the right length. Good job.

Green Gallant.

Really well written, but Cat would know what her period is, she's very innocent but not that innocent

Aw hellllll yeah! 8D This is even better than the other version you wrote! You captured Cat and Robbie's personalties really well, including throughout the hot lemon! ;P Sweet job! Cabbie rules!

Not what I was expecting from Cat, I expected her to be...aware of sex lol. But it worked. Nice work.

this was awesome! you managed to keep Robbie and Cat in character very well, and the lemon was quite hot :)
good job!

Great story :). I loved that they were in-character :)

make a chapter about the day after? they come to school and meet the gang (cat is not good at keeping secrets...) ?

Wow... this is good. Like really good. I'm not one to read lemon (I read it on rare occasion), but that was extremely talented what you did there. You kept both Cat and Robbie in character even thought they were doing some... very mature things lol ;). Now I definitely know what kinds of things I want to include in my story if I ever get to write the chapter. Thanks so much for writing this! I loved it!