What about Al? How does he feel about them getting back together? I kind of want to know his reaction to knowing how badly he hurt Ed.

It is beautiful story. Amazingly written. It is so emotional, but so realistic...Ah, you are really fantastic! It is such complex themecheating, but you have written it so well that i have been reading it suprisingly easy. Every word is washing over my heart. There is no pause. Only strong emotions that leave me breatless. It is gorgeous.
Only flaw that i found in it is the fact that Ed is cheating (especially for such long period of time). I can't possibly imagine any of them, but especially, especially Ed (our Ed that doesn't have even a fiber within himself that wants, trys to do anything wrong, anything harmful). They are both so loyal. They would die, do anything, before they would breake they loyality and cheathing is nothing but breaking the loyality. Maybe i am too idealistic (don't get me wrong, i still know they have flaws), but i just can't see it happening. It is impossible.
Anyway, thank you for writing story with such awesome passion. It strucked me right on the core.

First, Thank you very much for sharing your talent. What an amazing, well-written story this is. It took me 3 tries to read it completely, and TBH I'm not sure if I'm glad I read it or not. First time, it hurt me too much to read it through the first chapter. Second try was the same. I spiraled into hard depression because Roy's feelings were conveyed so very well... So raw. Third time was probably my glutton for punishment/curiosity killed the cat temptation that got me through both chapter. Thank you for writing and sharing this. Personally I don't think Roy should have forgiven Ed. He tried the first time and these things just don't normally work out. There are cases where people do it for the sake of the family (children) but these two have none. I suppose I feel that way because Ed was so brutal the way it went down. Roy did NOTHING wrong. He wasn't lacking in anything and Ed just went on with Aaron for a whole year ... Just cause. What the sex was good? Was it better? I mean, Ed was just a total ass in this. OK, I shut up now. That's just one simple reader's opinion. Again, this was beautiful, and while it tore me apart reading it, it was still one of the most magnificent FF I've read. I'm a picky reader. Keep on doing what you do and thank you for sharing. Have a great day!

this was was great you did a

more than halfway through second chapter, fearful whether ed kilt himself.

im sobbing

actually though

Best fucking fanfiction I have ever read.

I love it! Haha but i was actually hoping for a more tragic ending... Like ed dying or something xp hehe

Ohforfucksake! I'll never be able to look at Edward the same again!

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I don't know why I read this. I knew it was going to hurt. I'm crying. I felt so bad for both of them, even though Ed was in the wrong. I love the ending. You made Roy's road to forgiveness seem realistic. I'm emotionally drained. Thank you for your story.

I want to know more about Aaron. I hate him a little bit x D

THIS WAS SO FRICKING GOOD AND I WANTED TO CRY AND KI SOMEONE AT THW SAME TIME! Ug you are an amazing writer and i love you.

It's so sad what happened to Roy, what he thought and felt. I felt sorry and sad for Aaron as well. It was sad what happened to both him and Roy. I loved the ending. It was a beautiful story.

One of the best things I've ever read.

I think this was beautifully written. I even got emotional from reading it. The way you wrote it made us readers emotionally connect with the characters. Thank you for creating such a wonderful piece. :D