| Reviews for A Guardian's Troubles |
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  yourfatherUbitch chapter 26 . 7/23 How can you destroy astory you b**ch |
 ButterBeep chapter 14 . 7/10 The fact that Alex is the way it is, is annoying and I'm out. |
| bruh chapter 1 . 7/7 1st. Percy knows he can't sulk and he would purposely act more cheery for other peoples benefits. 2nd. If Percy really sulks this bad then he is just a brat. 3rd. Many other characters lose people, sure Silena and Piper cried, but I don't see them sulking and being a brat. no they try to help people. 4th. yeah yeah yeah, Percy and Annabeth had "true love" but so did Silena and Beckendorf. Plus, If they had "true love" then Percy will most definitely not get together with Artemis. 5th. simple, WHO IN THERE RIGHT OF MIND WOULD JOIN THE HUNT AS A MALE? plus if he joins the hunt, he is obviously not looking to fall in love. and even less likely to a goddess who's hunters most likely will torture him. I could list more but I wanna continue the story and I'm lazy |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/13 I diiiid d |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/13 I just came to say hello hello |
| Anonymous chapter 10 . 6/12 Something lemony maybe? Idk. At least something pervy? |
| yeet chapter 10 . 5/25 yeet |
| NightblueAce chapter 12 . 5/16 Im confused... percy is dead and at the Same time alive? How? |
| WhiteAce chapter 9 . 5/16 (. . ) (' ' ) ( ' ' ) ( ' ') ( . .) ( . . ) (•.•) There's a Review button, mind dropping a comment on this chapter |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/29 great job most people would have cracked by now(by most people i mean me) keep going :) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/23 Don't look at me:) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/10 Hi |
| Derek T.Wessels chapter 22 . 1/24 "BOMBTASTIC" |
| goddessqueen222 chapter 5 . 1/21 she should have a girl (I know I'm late but whatever) |
| Fairy King Oberon chapter 1 . 1/6 I'm sorry I really hate to be a jerk here but in my opinion your storytelling/writing is just so bad. I mean the plot looks nice and the summary was good, but the writing itself feels lazy and instead of world building you throw things in on a whim with no explanation as if you just came up with it while writing. I'm not saying that sudden ideas like that are bad, but things that are fundamental to the story like Annabeth being dead and the rule about no contact with your kids being lifted are important enough to warrant explanation, but you just put them out in random places leaving the reader to have to go 'ok, this is a thing now' in such a way that it's like walking down the stairs but then suddenly the last stair doesn't exist anymore. it's shocking, confusing, and you quickly wish it hadn't happened. rant over, sorry for being a vocally picky critic who honestly couldn't do much better if he tried. |
