Reviews for The Penthouse
LillyHalliwell chapter 4 . 10/1/2014
Loved how sweat Chuck was at the end!
UniBReady chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
I've never seen a Chuck universe story setup of quite like this. I've never seen both chuck, and sarah act this way. The butt floss joke was very funny. This story has had my heart pounding in my chest. Now all I can say is WOW!
I'd like to know more about you, the author of this story.
Selonianth chapter 4 . 5/1/2013
not badly done at all...
plan1955 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Oh Wow! I love this story! Please keep writing!

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Reyes9 chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
Nice final chapter. Loved it all. Hope u write a new m-rated one.
DemigoddessKat chapter 4 . 2/26/2013
Wow, loved it, loved this whole thing. It's got to be one of the hottest damn fics I have ever read, and I've read a few. I'm new to this particular fansite, but I am die hard Charah and can't wait to see what you have next.-Kat
Maverick41 chapter 4 . 2/25/2013
Ok, I know I said chp. 2 was my favorite, but this chapter has quickly replaced it! That shower scene was all kinds of awesome.

Of course Chuck would pack Sarah extra clothes, it's who he is...And we all love him for it.

Really hope you continue writing more smut for the Chuckverse. Would really be interested in reading regular Chuck stories as well from you.
Maverick41 chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
Glad that there's another chapter, but sad it's the last one.

This was extremely hot, although the previous chapter was my favorite of this story so far.

Even though this is dom/sub, the Charah in this story is so damn awesome!
Lev chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
Excellent finish. Thanks for doing this story, it was terrific and very sexy.
mika22412 chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
Dude... Dude... I have no words! This was awesome. I hate that there are not many M rated chuck/sarah stories. This one was amazing. You manage to write them in character and loving and kinky all in one. I love how they both got to be dominant and submissive. I was hoping you would have the make love slowly and you were on point. As I was reading, you hit the things I was hoping to see. I think my favorite was that chuck brought her an outfit to wear so that she would not look like a hooker. This is something I think chuck would really do. I is always looking out for sarah.

You are also a great writer. This is a very well written story. I love how you explained in chapter 2 what sparked sarahs interest in the whole thing.

Please, please write more chuck and sarah stories. I would read anything you wrote about them. And always make it T or above. Your great at writing this.

Again, I appreciate the time you took in writing this story and sharing it with us. I hope you can tell how much I loved your story and see how great of a writer I think you are.
CaryR chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
Great Story. Full of smut and emotion. Thanks!
meleander chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
Another good story from you :)
BVR2109 chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
Fantastic story. Really enjoyed it. Plenty hot to go around. Hope to see some more stuff by you.
Hotski chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
This was probably my favorite chapter TBH, I loved how they couldn't stay in characters in the morning and made love as Chuck and Sarah in a normal way, it show sthat they aren't tired of their normal every day sex life. That is one of the problems with BDSM, and other things when it's brought into the bedroom. But as the sucker I am the first scene in this chapter was my favorite scene. I liked the bathroom scene too where Chuck got into character again.

BDSM is not my thing, domination playing is not really my thing but this story has been really good. You're a great writer and what I've loved the most is that the love have been here all the time, they've been playful and played around with being the dominant and dominated one but the love have been there all the time, I really loved for an exampel when Sarah nipped at his nipples and when she slapped him, not hard and only when acting but she was so worried to do it and got so releved when she saw him feeling geat pleasure by it. Yet again you've been a great writer, for most authors in this m-section I would probably not join a BDSM story but you made on hell of a job with showing the love they got for Sarah and Chuck here all the time.

Loved the ILY here and that Chuck brought her adress which wouldn't make her look like a hooker, which make my sucker heart feeling great again. ;) Only one thing in the story I didn't like and it was the drivers comment but it's with how I don't like them acting out in public, yeah I'm a public prude. ;) But it was just a little thing.

2(?) good stories out of 2, as long as it's Chuck and Sarah(if it sounds like I'm needy and wanna tell you the direction you should take, it's not like that), only shipping Charah and want don't like when they bring in others so count me in for the future, well as long as you aint taking the scat-direction!
Anonymous chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
Love this story, very hot and probably the best M rated fic I've read. Sad to hear this is the final chapter, I was hoping for more.

Hope you continue with more M-rated stuff.
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