Reviews for Troublesome Discoveries
daliapv.perez chapter 8 . 2h
Interesante muy bien espero pronto el próximo capítulo.
S-Lioness chapter 8 . 7/11
I wonder if you will ever switch povs. I was waiting for this point in the story and I am very looking forward to what and how much Tsuna will tell Reborn. I wonder if Tsuna will decide to go gender neutral.
S-Lioness chapter 7 . 7/11
I wonder if Tsuna will become gender neutral, also I wonder if he will have different guardians regardless of his possessiveness?
Luna from Harry Potter chapter 8 . 7/8
I'm so in love with this
Choking. On. Marshmallows chapter 8 . 7/4
Freaking cliffhangers…Well aside from that, great chapter! Like all the other chapters you have written, it is great!
sixfullmoons chapter 8 . 6/27
This is honestly amazing! Really excited to see where this goes
BlackSakura-chi chapter 8 . 6/21
I like how Tsuna still has a male mindset even though I mainly like female protagonist. Though I do get confused when the narrative is talking about one of the guardians while at the same time talking about Tsuna as a 'he' and sometimes wonder who is who they are describing so having it a "she" for me makes it easier to follow, but this is still great! Because in a sense Tsuna still is trying to understand that he's in a girl's body but his behaviour is that of a boy's so he would treat the guys as would a boy would treat them. But in the outside point of view Tsuna is a girl so for some people it felt more like a some sort of "crush"? Like Hayato's reactions with flushed faces but it's because Tsuna still thinks of him as a guy with a guy friend but not for Hayato lol. Especially, the twin brother's protectiveness when it comes to guys flocking around Tsuna-chan lolololol

Also, I know that this is mainly family/friendship fluff and no romance. Though not full blown romance, for me, it'll be nice if there's subtle romance for this case. Like ones that have hints which doesn't really clarify their feelings though it's still a sprout (they are still middle school aged lol). But let's say they would somehow grow to it later like the 10 years gap or more. If you're still following the 10 year future arc vs Byakuran, it might be good to like show hints of the guardians showing a subtle affections to Future Tsuna (more in the case how they kinda sort of trying to understand their feelings when Future Tsuna died and they realised it finally at the same time regret). When it comes to the pairings, like after the ending or something that has no definite pairing, as some sort of epilogue I've seen how some fanfics make one shot/special chapter for each pairing to make it feel so broad.

Another point , not a request, but I like Female Tsuna as some of the fanfictions I read with KHR, especially the crossover for Assassination Classroom recently, I like it how the guardians were so "overprotective" to Tsuna and how he gets a tiny bit uke sometimes like not much (this is usually the case for Hibari and MukuroAdult Reborn). But when Tsuna is a female, rather than their feelings being overprotective it felt more of "admiration?"
aGnamZer0 chapter 8 . 6/9
About Gokudera, I'm really happy he learned to reign his temper and isn't trigger happy anymore – even if it's mostly because he doesn't manage to be himself around Tsuna for now, I hope you'll keep this level of composure in his personality. For example, when Yamamoto slung his arm around Tsuna's shoulders, in canon he would have yelled how he shouldn't be so friendly with his dear Juudaime and would maybe even have shot dynamite. And honestly, I just can't stand canon Gokudera anymore.

I really fear this shopping with Kyoko and Hana you know. I don't care that Tsuna's starting to see himself as a girl, even if goes through a difficult transition phase, but to go as far as going shopping with girls, men's worth nightmare, I can't accept it. My only consolation being they only go for hats.

I didn't expect Tsuna and Yamamoto's relationship to turn that way, but it seems most interesting indeed. I often noticed that Yamamoto for some reason wasn't as much featured as other characters in KHR fics. It's personally one my favorite characters and he deserves more than that. So please, I'd really like Takeshi to be Tsuna's true first friend. His best friend, his right hand man even. No need to give the position to Gokudera, the dynamics are obviously different in your universe.

About Reborn, it was about time he finally confronts Tsuna. I have some interrogations though. Since we basically see evrything from Tsuna's viewpoint, we do not know how much Reborn witnessed. Did he see the 'sparring' between Tsuna and Hibari in the clearing? Did he see how Tsuna manages so well the disciplinary committee, attributes well the roles, takes care of the greenhorns...? Did he see how Tsuna led a 'war meeting' with Hibari and Tetsuya? How he guessed the yakuzas comportment and goals? Did he see the different conversations he had with a few of his guardians where he acted really mature? Or even the gazes, or sweet – read frightening – smiles he gave a few people? Well, basically, how much does Reborn know and from what clues does he have besides the shot he gave Tsuna and the Dying Will Flame?

I usually don't broach this topic, but I just noticed this fic hasn't been updated since a year and half. Yet it seems you continue to read and write fics, so you didn't completely drop fanfictions. Please, tell me I can expect more for this fic. It's such an awesome work, it deserves more. I want more, it's just so good. I want to see what will happen. I would really be grateful if you informed me of the status of this fic – preferably that this was just a hiatus and that you will continue it :D

Anyway, thank you for writing it. I spent a great time reading it. Kudos!
aGnamZer0 chapter 7 . 6/9
Honestly, when Hayato was about to leave, I was happy. I'm not a big fan of the silver hair. But this relationship he has with Tsuna, a relationship where he doesn't worships the ground she walks on, a relationship where he isn't all 'Juudaime this and Juudaime that' may be interesting. Plus, mellowed out and isn't trying to explode everything and everyone close to Tsuna. If you keep his personality that way, I may actually enjoy his presence.

About the shopping spree with Kyoko and Hana, I really can't help but dread it. Please tell me he will not discover himself some feminity and want to wear robes and skirts. It would be too much for me, really.

That may sound a little heartless, but I always found Takeshi's suicide attempt one of the event I await for the most when reading fanfics. I always wonder how the authors will play the scene, what words will Tsuna choose to say Takeshi. While Tsuna preventing the attempt itself is also very endearing, I still hope it will happen.
aGnamZer0 chapter 6 . 6/9
Honestly, despite Tsuna being obviously more qualified, I had thought it would be the 'Twin Brother Heir' trope. But Tsuna being the Decimo herself is pretty good as well.

Even if Tsuna randomly pulls out her dying will flames, I'd like Reborn not to know who she really is. Except Byakuran, I don't want anyone to know who she is. Of course, they will ask thmeselves question, like how do you know how to use flames, how are you so good at management, where did you learn to fight, how do you know so much about mafia... but her playing the mysterious card would just be so much fun!
aGnamZer0 chapter 5 . 6/9
Yep, like I thought Reborn is pleasantly surprised by what he discovered. And like I thought, Iemitsu is a complete idiot who never visited his family in years and don't know anything about them.

That being said, I hope Tsuna will keep wearing boyish like clothes. I'm a guy myself, and if for some mysthical reason I ended up as a girl, I'd definitely never wear skirts. And just imagining Tsuna wear one makes me cringe.
aGnamZer0 chapter 4 . 6/9
I really love the respect – near sixcon level – that Takahiro has towards his Onee-chan. Ah, I'm so happy you decided to make twins for this story! It was probably your best idea. Your second best was to make said twin so cute and lovable. Ah, I'm becoming a fanboy, I must be careful.

Good choice about Tsuna's guardians. They shouldn't come to this world, for a lot of different reasons. Happy I don't have to worry about that anymore.

Next chapter will be how Reborn will get enamoured by Tsuna. Oh, I want to see that. Plus, since Takahiro isn't a Dame-Taka, Reborn will also like him. Oh, I love this story. I feel like I don't tell it enough.
aGnamZer0 chapter 3 . 6/9
It was an awesome chapter! Of course, the growing friendsip, comradeship between Tsuna and Hibari was good, but the best was definitely the scene with Takahiro.

When he said that no, he had no excuse for bullying the kid, I hadn't expected Tsuna to ask him how is day went. That took me completely by surprise. But I knew she wouldn't really berate him and rather try to understand him. It's her nature after all. She's that all encompassing sky accepting all of the flames, other skies alike.

This heart to heart conversation between the two siblings was really heart-warming. And though I always dreamed to have a little brother, for once, just for once, I felt I wanted to have a big sister. How, I know it was just a thought in passing and that I would never want that if I take more time to think about it, but for a short time, I did. It was the extent to which I touched by this scene.

I'm also happy you don't intend to have a relationship between Tsuna and Taka. Don't misunderstand me, I'm not against incest relationships in fics, novels or mangas, but the relationship between those two is so pure, I feel like it would be sacrilege. I hope they'll keep being such close siblings and that nothing will ever separate them.

About the idea of bringing Tsuna's original guardians in this world, I'm completely opposite to it. Wether it's time travel or dimensional travel, I always prefered when it affected the MC. Plus, I read a few fics where Tsuna's guardians where brought to her new timeline/universe sometime later, and it never failed to ruin my enjoyment of the fic. And like Tsuna said in the first chapter, she has to look forward and not cling to the past, seemingly an advice from Reborn. As the author, you should help her in that resolution and not bring people from her past life. Please, do not do that. The only one I could understand would be Byakugan since he's... you know, Byakugan.
aGnamZer0 chapter 2 . 6/9
I have to disagree with you. This chapter ISN'T choppy.

The greatest point of this chapter was to show that Tsuna's brother, Takahiko was in fact a good brother that cared for his sister. If I had to bet, I'd say that when they were younger they played and got along very well with each other. Except some kind of incident must have happened and Takahiko was disappointed his sister was so weak and coward and didn't try to defend herself. That or she tried to defend Takahiko when he was attacked, without regard for her safety, and he tried to make her destest him so she wouldn't do that again. Well, there are pletora of reasons that could explain the current Takahiko but what I know is that I like him. He isn't like this IeyoshiTM that those fics tend to depict, a brother who hates and bullies his twin.

I really expect a lot from this fic, it has a lot of potential.
aGnamZer0 chapter 1 . 6/9
Usually, I'm not a big fan of changing the genre of the MC, but this time I find that I don't care. Maybe because you said there would be no romance, or maybe because you just wrote it that well.

I think I will really love this fic. Now, remains to see how she will decide to go to change things.
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