Reviews for Wings of Steel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad you worked through your frustrations on this one and know it didn't disappoint. I loved the gift of the intricate bird Tenten made for Neji and of course the intense build up to see if affections would be revealed. The humor of course was the best. All those little details amounted to lots and lots of smiles along the way. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, this is so so cute. I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, thanks for writing. I have produced some happy giggles. At the end, I was thinking they might literally fly together, in a Hakkeshou Kaiten/ projectile storm combo ninja move. The Green Beasts' perspective was an excellent dose of humor. I like the "met in the middle" phrasing. I don't think the admirers would vanish after being ignored for a while - I expect stealth or other trickery would be needed. Overall, fun fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful! This entire fic managed to be both hilarious and absolutely squee-worthy, which, as an author who could not write decent humor to save my life, I have to commend you for. I was hooked from the introduction. That's exactly how I imagine Neji would see Valentine's Day: a frivolous waste of perfectly good training time. I loved the idea of Tenten's gift, too! That seems like the sort of thing she might do. And, might I add, your portrayal of Gai-sensei and Lee was totally spot-on. This was so well-written, and absolutely adorable. Great job! |
![]() ![]() SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! *SQUEAAAAAL*! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is so cute. I just-just, wow, y'know? This is a really great one-shot. The writing style was great, your grammar was good and the plot is amazing, with just the right amount of humor and seriousness blending together. Seriously, I hope you write more of these. I don't stumble across many well-written Nejiten fics nowadays. :) P.S. I don't usually comment on other people's stories; I tend to just fave it, but your story definitely deserved praise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. LOVED. THIS. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so fluffy! It's good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahaha hilarious and sweet at the same time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! :) |