OH MA GOODNESSSSS, I have a feeling her dad totally betrayed her, but a part of me doesn't want to think so, I hope she's okay though, and that Altair finds her...

I really hope you come back to this one day. This is by far one of the best assassin's creed fanfics I've read!

I love this story, but are you ever going to update this amazingly awesome story again, since its been over a year? I hope you will get inspired to finish this story and I hope it is not abandoned since I'm looking froward to more of this story.
A fan always
Ashley

Hope you update soon.

I finished Syndicate over a span of about 4 months. It keeps you busy.

woooow-first comment from me but thus whole story wa amazing! whar is really good sbout this ac fanfic is that its a more realistic slow development of my favourite characters and your oc chracte sa'idah was really good-cod you h
ad to start her from scratch

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter!

Oh, I'm playing AC Syndicate. Believe it or not I've gotten farther in that one than Unity. (Try figuring that out...) I'm simply loving that game. I haven't beaten it yet because let's face it those with ADHD do tend to have a hard time focusing on just one thing. I know I do anyway. I'm hoping to finish it soon. if not...welp, I will finish it. LOL

HEEEEEEEY!1111!
WHERE IS ThE NEXT CHAPTER!?
FOR SOME REASON I CAN'T FIND IT!
I NEEEEED MORE CHAPTERS!
THANKS!

Update?

I freaking love your story. It is written brilliantly and I am loving every minute of it. I love how you are slowly defining. Their relationship with each other instead of going super fast with it, its very refreshing. Your writing is amazing and I cannot wait for more :)

Ooh, intrigue - I can't wait for more! I truly enjoyed this story, and Altair and Sai'da make quite a match. I was so happy when they finally kissed!
Anyway, I'll be looking forwards to future chapters, and the eminent confrontation between Altair and 'Azab

It's a great start so far - I'm really enjoying it so far.

However, I've seen in a few places that you're using 'their' instead of 'there'; you might want to revise that:)

Loving the story so far! Altair is perfectly in character:)

Brilliant! Can you get the next chapter up soon? I'm really looking forward to it!

I enjoyed reading this.

This is such a well-written fic. The characterization is fantastic (Sa'ida and 'Azab are written so well as to feel like legitimate characters in the game series) and the plot is enticing. I'm excited for the next chapter. :D Great job.