I beg of you please do continue this! I love how it's written in such a realistic manner it's making me cry!

update asap

Great chapter, as always. It's nice to see I was able to help you.
I wonder if Susan knows about the chart, and if she does what she thinks of it. (I know I would be mortified).
I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Ooooooh now that he knows what now?

Yay! Caspian POV! You make it sound like the baby is to be a boy. But the name of the story is Nina?

Wait I'm confused was that capstan in narnia? Why did he have a baby was that a dream? IM CONFUSED!

I think he was there.

Lucy with a light reddish hair and grayish eyes and Ed with brown hair and brownish eyes.

Brilliant, as always ;)
Susan talks about her scar streching. What scar would that be?
Also I love how you use the word curvaceos (I may have misspelled it); it's an awesome word!

Wow did she really get drunk while she was pregnant? That's really bad!

Hey. Til now I really like your story, but I have one question: Are you going to bring Susan back to Narnia or will you stick to what Aslan told her and Peter?
..Narnian traditions... I don't know any, but I'd guess that they would celebrate the royal's birth for a few days...
If you mean to teach the child some of the traditions when it grows up, I'd suggest some dances, songs and things like that...

This is great! Update soon

Wow that place is horrible why on earth did her mother send her there? Well I think that Peter, Edmund and Lucy should run away to make a point!

You could check Narniawiki. That might give you some ideas.

I don't know the Narnian traditions, but in the earlier chapter chapters before, it is gonna be a girl? Named Nina?