Reviews for Pure Alchemy
Guest chapter 11 . 5/5/2018
Wow, that last chapter though! It was fluffier than the others, but just as good and it felt like a good ending; this entire fic was excellent and a pleasure to read. Thank you so much(
Guest chapter 7 . 5/4/2018
Honestly, I love your chapter names, and the Beasts. 'Kay, this chapter was such fun, from hospital rooms to worm induced cave-ins, it's all great!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/4/2018
The Pyro reminds me greatly of a Torkoal or Camerupt, though I doubt it's either of them. That said, love that it likes Mustang and the lure to the stadium was a good idea.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2018
As a Studio Ghibli fan and of strange realities, I love what you did with the Gate; also the different PoVs are really well written and characterized.
crownclown123 chapter 11 . 4/30/2018
It was really awesome ! I like your idea of the Gate and of the Beasts and how Ed just take it all in stroll (I loved the whole thing in Aquroya, and I can totally imagine Ed getting back as Lieutenant Colonel, Fullmetal Alchemist to pay back for the boat and check on the Major who was thereThanks for sharing, it was a really good read !
evergreen-icy chapter 1 . 3/26/2018
The best I've ever read. Every character act the way they would acted in the anime, and the plot is really interesting. I like the idea of Ed being trapped inside of the gate instead of across it. And the way Ed and Roy support each other is really fantastic.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
en-shaedn chapter 11 . 3/17/2016
I really enjoyed this story! Thank you for writing!
calcu22 chapter 11 . 11/10/2014
just finished this story and loved it. A great AU to the anime ended which I agree was a little anti climatic by haveing Germany be on the other side of the gate. Really liked how in character they were and there was lots of humor. Great story all around!
meladi1 chapter 11 . 2/4/2014
BEST STORY EVER
Guest chapter 11 . 12/21/2013
I only reserve my comments for stories that I thoroughly enjoy... So congrats! You've made one of my top favorites (not that it'll mean much to you). You had the PERFECT blend of everything. You had the suspense, the heart-warming moments (a few made me tear up a little), the fluff, the humor (especially the witty banter between Ed and Roy and Havocs jokes), the good story plot, and most importantly all of the characters were in character. That's really hard to do, so I commend you for it. To sum it all up, you have talent. Keep writing! I'd love to read more of your stuff in the future! :)
beachgirl5647 chapter 11 . 11/16/2013
this story was brilliant and i loved how it ended! you should continuing writing stories like this!
VIKAN chapter 11 . 6/25/2013
Loved this! Great work!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/31/2013
A good ending. It was all serious, and then when I got to your A/N, I lost it. The first sentence just made me laugh. Personally, I like this the way it is, but if you want to write a sequel, then by all means do so. This has been a wonderful ride and I'm glad to have made the trip.
Angelic Fluffle chapter 11 . 6/2/2013
I adored this story!
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