Reviews for Konoha's Inventor
SyazwanKoi chapter 3 . 6/29
it's a nice Fanfic and I hope you continue
Julie Araize Reisinger chapter 3 . 5/22
Plz update this story! It's really good and I really want to know what happens in the exams! Also this is a really great story I really love it tbh! I look forward in continuing reading this story.
Heartfire12 chapter 3 . 3/21
Super Histoire

Dommage qu'il n'y est pas de suite
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 3 . 12/24/2019
Damn man you gotta update this story! This book is awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter! Lol! I wanna see sky country's reaction to the air balloon. LMAO!
Qex chapter 3 . 5/3/2019
Please please update!
Reft chapter 3 . 5/3/2019
love it!
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 3 . 4/21/2019
Pls make more this story is great!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/10/2019
Could you please update
Guest chapter 3 . 3/15/2019
"I'll save jiji the headache".. Wasn't that the EXACT reasoning kakshi gave for letting the civilians tell him to pass the weakling runt? You know for wanting spare the old man a headache, they sure are causing the old man a lot of headaches! Also isn't that what a LEADER is SUPPOSED to do? I mean as it is, sarutobi has computers and data pads and everything else, he barely even has to THINK for himself anymore with those "advisors" and naruto around! So my question is, WHAT EXACTLY DOES HE DO? This is not a flame it's a legit question.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/15/2019
I LOVED the bit with the hokage driving the airship! That was GREAT, the humor was spot-on!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/15/2019
Well if it's encrypted, then the info is safe, nobody in the naru-verse strikes me as being bright enough to crack even an EXTREMELY simple cypher! Oroch, danzo and other "geniuses" are PAINFULLY OBVIOUS in all their "secret plans". Lets just say "if intelligence is a FIRE of creativity, these people would all freeze to death".If naruto has all the knowledge in uzu now, then his sealing now blows the doors off of the hermit toad, I don't see why he needs to "confer" with him.

If naruto is directly under the hokage, why THE HECK IS HE EVEN TELLING the shinobi council OR the advisors ANYTHING?! Doesn't that kinda DEFEAT THE PURPOSE of "secret"? And danzo "oh yeah jiji, there IS a hideen army in your village, spread out all through it and that is NOT under your control, but don't worry about it!"... wtf? Konoha seems to have more holes in it then a slice of swiss cheese!

Times of crisis? Boy are they about to get SICK of those! Invasion by sand/sound, pein's invasion, zombie invasion, invasion by air village, invasion by white zetsu army. A LOT of INVASIONS!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
Well, while I WILL say the kyuubi never "took over" naruto so minato was at least that good.. I wouldn't really say it "couldn't alter his mind". Because either from naruto forming inside kushina while she was the vessel of kyuubi or because it was sealed the day of his birth, or a combo of both, his mind definitely shows SOME alterations:

1. He is very protective of his "precious people" or his sulk. Sometimes TOO protective. Like a kitsune.

2. He seems to have the total INABILITY to break his promises, like a kitsune.

3. He loves performing pranks and is a trickster, both traits of a kitsune.

4. He's very good at shapeshifting, like a kitsune.

5. He often assumes female form and usually naked in order to distract his opponent, like a kitsune.

There are more examples, but those are the glaring ones that are easy to compare to Japanese myth.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
Well not be able to go to any restaurants is a ff falsity. Number 1. He's seen eating at said restaurants in konoha DURING the series. And number 2. Them refusing him service, or doing badly, or poisoning the food, would ALL be very easily CAUGHT by the hokage! It's too overt, and that would get them, the owners, etc.. ALL KILLED! So that idea doesn't work. Glares, whispers, Those things can't REALLY be controlled (well they CAN in the naru verse but they aren't), but overt displays are easily caught/punished, which breaks the whole chain! (just some food for thought)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
Naruto has been in the school for THREE YEARS and he doesn't even know the TERM kinjutsu?.. Or that there are OTHER types of clones? Where the hell are they all supposed to learn BASIC information like that, if NOT at the school? They don't HAVE universities! EVERYTHING they know HAS to be taught at that academy! At least TERMINOLOGY! The jounin are NOT going to break from a mission just to lecture illiterate children after all, they are SUPPOSED to be fully functioning ADULT KILLERS, when they graduate! While I know that this kinda seems to run COUNTER to what the manga/anime shows, they DO know this stuff in the series so they HAD to pick it up at the academy, so they HAD to do something ELSE other then history and book work!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
How could it possibly take a LOT of time for people to get used to the new naruto, you said he's 5 right? Well unless he was hyperactive, an idiot and pulling pranks before he could WALK and TALK properly, then there has only been 2-3(at most) years that they've known THAT naruto ether.

And I am SICK of hearing about "lack of magical potency" if he's got such a HUGE SWELL of magic and ONE of chakra, just use the chakra as mako and go from there! Sheez, or if it HAS to be damaging, use the fox's chakra.. It's kinda pathetic how EASY this should be!

Just to give you a SMALL comparison, naruto, if he learned what all the shadow clones could do in the beginning... He should be able to beat NAGETO into a blood stain by the time sasuke defected! Shippuden never even needed to happen, as he would already be GODLIKE! UNSTOPPABLE! And that's BEFORE adding "magic".
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