| Reviews for Insomnia |
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  Guest chapter 15 . 10/26/2018 Idk, that kiss kinda came out of no where, Haruna didn’t even have a contemplation of, ‘huh, I seem to like this guy.’ So far it’s only been the typical signs of inital infatuation based on appearance aka lust and not love (she may have seen/read one piece but that doesn’t mean she knows or understands the characters as if they were normal people) |
 AndurilofTolkien chapter 3 . 6/15/2016 love |
| NightHunterDeath chapter 28 . 1/21/2016 ...I'm actually really glad because I don't remember what this story was about... |
| AndurilofTolkien chapter 5 . 1/20/2016 like this so far |
| Apple Bloom chapter 27 . 7/28/2015 Well you keep your viewers waiting a year so why not continue with this story even i will follow up on chapters MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!1 |
| Red knight 2004 chapter 16 . 3/15/2015 *Fan girling over Law's reaction* So so cute... |
| Salerina chapter 4 . 9/7/2014 kyaaa! smoker! smoker! Good one! In any other fic I read that Law referred a person with "Miss" or "mister", I don't know if it was true or not... Ganbate ne! |
| Salerina chapter 3 . 9/7/2014 oh wow... Law is interested in her! Good job making this fic different. Law always encountered an OC at Sabaody park in everyone else's fic so this is a nice change. Ganbate ne! |
| Salerina chapter 1 . 9/6/2014 who's the creepy man?! A good start, but maybe a little to fast? Ganbatte ne! |
| dlutoria chapter 27 . 8/15/2014 you must must must update this as soon as possible! Can I request something? I want to see how is Law's look when he is jealous toward haruna Update pleeasse! this fic absolutely will be my fav! |
| XylimLinyx chapter 27 . 6/10/2014 *gasp* no way! What will he do? And Rin, you're terrible! How dare you use people to get what you want! Law wants nothing to do with you! (Your story gets me fired up real easy :)) Can't wait to see what Law does and what happens to Haruna! |
| pokemonjkl chapter 27 . 6/9/2014 O.M.G O_O and Fainting X_X! See you on the next chapter |
| 10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 27 . 6/8/2014 Using a fluffy hat to beat s horde of people...It could be done.0-0 |
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 27 . 6/8/2014 He doesn't know much about Law's powers, does he? -shakes head with sigh- Even if Law DID care about them all, he could just use Shambles to get them all out of the way. Really, Shachi's the only one there he wants to keep alive. There's a difference between Haruna and Rin. Rin hasn't been sailing with a doctor this entire time. Surely Haruna knows by know where it would hurt most to be struck. Kidneys, joints, ribs... The bottom ribs are the easiest to break because they're the smallest and most fragile. |
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 27 . 6/7/2014 Is it just me or was that a short chapter? Anyhow, pretty sweet fight. Some development on Haruna's ability (what is this the second time she's used it?), loving it though. Like she's erupting lol. So this Rin girl is a little crazed huh? "Making a life" PLEASE save me the energy and don't even. I wish we can see more of their fight. Perhaps get some more bone breaking ;) And maybe infuse some more of Rin's thoughts on Law. Like possibly have her mention what she plans to do if she is able to obtain (if you will haha) Law for herself. Because I'm sure things like that will get Haruna pissed as fuck and she'll like smash rib's face into the ground (like what Luffy did with Bellamy). That'd be sick. Yayy! Law's thoughts on Haruna! I'll be honest in saying I don't remember any point of what he thought about Haruna being stated but it's adorable actually. Because with the whole "she's becoming his weakness" concept it still says he doesn't necessarily want to be soft kinda thing. And that's reassuring since I don't want Law to get super protective and soft and blah not Law (I don't think anyone does). Great chapter still! Could defintely do better but there were parts that curbed my appetite. (: Update soon! |
