I loved your story so much! Especially how you ended it. So sweet. Thank you
Liz S

Such a nice story!

Good story

Such a great story! I wish it hadn't ended so soon though. Great writing! Thanks for sharing.

I really love this story. It is so great I just stayed up late to read it all. I really wish it was longer.

Aww this was so sweet. Almost wish it was longer, but you actually made the perfect ending. Great job hun.

Oh this made me laugh. His name is Phil, not Bill. but I really like this story so far.

Loved this story.

Very interesting. I wasn't sure at first, it sounded a bit hokey... but I decided to at least give it a go and I'm so glad I did. I giggled throughout most of it, just picturing Edward's face in my mind as he kept getting more and more frustrated with the situation, just to be thwarted by her every time.
Thank you so much for sharing this little bit of "fluff" with us, I enjoyed the hell out of it!
~Sassy

Mmmmm... I'm assuming Bella is immortal as long as she continues to change. I just kind of feel bad for Edward having to live the rest of his life craving the blood of his mate, doesn't seem fair. I really enjoyed the story and am glad you came back to finish it. I think you write well and the story was pretty cute. I think it had or has potential to be outstanding with more details and a bit of drama added, getting to know the family and maybe some wolf and school action. Even as is it was enjoyable to read, Bella was so cute as a cat that couldn't help wanting more. Thanks so much for coming back to finish it and sharing it.

I'm glad Bella relieved what she did would have caused fear.

I am so glad Edward reminded them all that the cat was Bella, seemed like they weren't going to acknowledge it or didn't realize it which would have been far fetched, not to mention weird. They should all be a little annoyed with her for tricking them. At least they know she is other also so there secret won't be revealed.

He should be assuming now that the cat is a human, that was his original thought anyway.
Bella probably left the door open so they would think she ran off but she's not thinking about her scent.

Bella should feel guilty. I was already thinking about how upset the Cullen were going to be when they realize Bella is a shifter. We still need more information about Bella being a cat. She doesn't smell bad to the Cullens and Alice can see visions of her. Why can't Alice see that she is human?

Does Bella realize she'll be eating cat food?... lol. That was slick of her.