The Doctor's reasons for wanting normal dates makes so much sense. Great thinking!

Finally! A normal date!
… As normal as it can get being the 1920’s, having Al Capone as host, dancing to Fats Waller’s music…
Perfectly normal!
Great work!

I so love this chapter! So full of feeling, beautifully written, on character. Just perfect.
So, this is your version of the Doctor's first real kiss in which he willingly participated. Best first kiss ever!

This was so sweet!

Aw, River would never hurt babies! But the ones hurting babies? That's another story.
But I did find weird how the Doctor didn't at least try to talk the dragons out of taking the thief with them. Yes, he stole the eggs and was going to do something really bad to and with the dragons, but he took care of them and the plan never came to be.
Letting a life go to waste (even an evil one) is a very un-doctor thing to do.

Another normal date Doctor style. An everything was going so well!
So, several bowling balls contained tiny-fire breathing-marrow eaters-dragons, and the Doctor solution was freeing all of them? Yeah, very doctorish.

I can't imagine River on a bunk bed.
This chapter was adorable!

Ha! I knew it! There's no normal with the Doctor around.

There IS one thing in the universe that River can't do! How is that even possible?

See? The Doctor doesn't now what 'normal' means. Rabbit breeding? *Shudder*

Does the Doctor know the definition of 'normal'? Somehow I think is not the same as ours. But I love his enthusiasm.
And, what kind of girl rejects dinner in Paris? Oh, I know! one that while posing as her parents' best friend, could easily steal money enough to take the train from Britain to Paris and have a wonderful weekend there.
This was a really good start.

Wonderful story

Oh a lovely finale! I want to go on that date!

(Late review, sorry)

Well, I'm a little sad this is the last chapter, but it was a perfect last chapter nonetheless. It took me a moment to understand what was going on in the first scene, but I found it funny once I did (Nice mixture between sweet and stalkerish there, Doctor :3). Love the dancing, too, and by the way, great choice in songs, they fit well. And that last line, was just amazing. That was a great fanfiction, and I really enjoyed reading it. I'll be keeping an eye out for anything else by you in the future. Ciao! :3

I loved this, a perfect end to a perfect story.

I love the irony of those last lines, "T'ain't what you do, it's the way that you do it, that's what gets results…" Considering when he was trying so hard, everything went wrong, but when he relaxed it worked.

(I admit, I did expect him to invite himself into her bathtub. That would be a "normal" thing they could do together. :D)

I like how the Tardis was humming along with her, and how he realized the Tardis has a special spot for River. And loved how River doesn't know Fats, but of course, she knows Al Capone. LOL!

Loved him calling Al Capone "Snorky." (I don't know if that's really true, or if you made it up, but it's hysterical.)

And I like how they came to a comfortable arrangement between themselves. She even let him wear a hat.

And, frankly, I've always loved that image of River as Ginger Rogers, how she could do everything he could do, backwards.

Love this story.