You are such a talented writer. The premise of tHis story is so refreshing. Do you still write? Anyway, I think you nailed every character's personality with perfect dialogue. This is a show I would love to see. Thanks.

I didn't see that ending coming. fun story. pepperwood and night, what a pair!

This is FANTASTIC! I can't wait for the next installment!

Loved this story. Such amazing writing!

This story is fabulous! I really enjoyed these two chapters - can't wait to find out what happens next :-)

OH MY GOD. I think i love you slightly, this was absolutely amazing. You had me in stitches with your writing for Julius Pepperwood, it was good and really in character. "deep dish pizzas" was the best line. It's a damn shame this is the end of this story. I look forward to reading anymore stories you write, I ultimately enjoy your style of writing. x

Just in Character my ass, he called her Jessica Day! I'm SORRY FOR HOW OBNOXIOUS I'M ABOUT TO SOUND, BUT THIS STORY IS PHENOMENAL AND YOU ARE AN INCREDIBLE WRITER! I am really looking forward to more from you! Great story, it had an amazing ending!

Oh I love it! The dialogue, the descriptions, all very loyal to the show and just as entertaining! Can't wait for the next one :)

Love it!

This is the PERFECT setup! I love it, please write more!