That is a stunning piece of work I just had the pleasure of reading. It was simple, yet entirely beautiful. Fantastic job.

If you ever consider the idea of writing a book, please let me know so I could be the first one buying it

This...is just so beautifully written I can't even...wow, just wow. Thank you for this.

This is a masterpiece. Thanks so much for sharing this! I hope to emulate this kind of maturity in my writing. Thank you for being an inspiration to those around you. This was such a treat to read :D

That was decidedly beautiful. I am in awe at how wonderfully written that story was. I read fanfiction in hopes of finding rare gems such as this amidst the thousands of other stories. You have such talent. Exceptional job!

I really like the way you wrote the story. I was a little bit surprised when i i first read it since its very rare to see such an amazing literary piece.

Amazing writing!

This is a truely powerful and amazing piece of writing!
also I love Takari!#you should write more of them I enjoy have raw with emotion this is

This is very beautiful. A true treat to read.

I really like this AU story, but somewhat strangely my favourite part is the Taichi-Hikari scene. It seems that it is more 'real' (it's not the best word, but I dunno which word to pick here) than the rest of the story. I like your description of the surroundings and Hikari's feelings, just a bit skeptical that she seems too passive in this story. It seems like she barely talks in this fic, although that maybe your intention, so I won't necessarily challenge that. I agree that Takeru is OOC here, probably not as playful but more arrogant in a sense, but still sounds like a plausible adult Takeru. Overall, great story. Hope to read more from you soon!