That was so good i really enjoyed reading this .

This is truly amazing. I enjoyed reading this FanFic.

Very cute.

Great story.

really enjoyed this chapter!

The first thing April would do after she goes into the hospital is scrubbing in, even if she still was on maternity leave :D Hilarious!
The scene between Jackson, Mark and Derek on the roof was great, they should put that on the show (with Alex instead of Mark for obvious reasons)
I didn't like Lexie in this chapter though but the ending is great, with a little flashback and the gratefulness :)
Very, very nice - congratulations! 3

Love it!

aw, that was cute - I like Blake Harper Avery though I doubt that Jackson would willingly put such pressure of the famous name Harper Avery on his own son
Plus, I don't think that Karen would suggest to stay or is April the first in her family to have a baby? I mean, she has three sisters and isn't the oldest one
This chapter was nice but it feels like there is something amiss - maybe because you used sentences like "he walked down the hall. He walked up to her" more than giving insight about how Jackson and April felt or thought about it
Other than that I quite enjoyed how little Avery was welcomed into his family :)

This is such an amazing story. Really great stuff! Just read it all in one go. You write beautifully! I loved it. Blake is a really cute name. :)
Hmm.. Wassup with Bailey? Is she preggy too?! :D Are we gonna get a sequel soon?! ;)

Welcome to the world Lil BHA. I thought it was also in bad taste to announce a pregnancy after a birth. It's their big moment. I think after a week would have been acceptable. I was surprised with the altercation but it was in character. Jackson was always protective of April and add his baby in the mix well he becomes papa bear. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

It's baby time.
Maureen

I like the name Noah.
Maureen

I'm excited please continue.
Maureen

Good start to your story. I like it so far.
Maureen

Aww Blake. Cute name :)