Reviews for Dawn Crux
Guest chapter 36 . 8/2
this was beautiful i’m near to tears. i’ll certainly be coming back to this in the future. thank you ~
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9
its been years and i always come back to this story. thank you so much for putting it on here
Guest chapter 37 . 1/25
I’ve read both books in two days an lived both of them! I’m supposed to be doing my tax returns but someone found these online an take my hat off to you. They were really engrossing an really enjoyable to read. For a 13 year old you write amazingly well. My only advice to you is to keep writing ! Write your own source material an get published as you have the skills an tools to do it. You may get rejected by publishers at some points but eventually you will prevail. You have to much talent not too. Keep writing ! - rus
Trixie chapter 18 . 11/15/2019
You can't tell me that in canon that Lucius doesn'know what a horcrux was he had enough dark artifacts in his house and had extensive dark arts knowledge that is why I love the way he reacts to tom. He has to know what that is.
A Reader chapter 37 . 6/19/2019
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I was worried that Tom and Harry would split up and that would make me depressed...
With that said...DON’T YOU EVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT EVER AGAIN!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2019
Even after all these years i still come back to this story. Thank you for writing this!
Joaquin chapter 37 . 2/12/2019
This is my second time reading this story and i loved it just as much as i did the first. Bravo. ]
TheSkyeDragon chapter 37 . 9/20/2018
I am SO NEAR TO TEARS! Jesus fucking christ, what have you reduced me to...I just...wow...I am a bit of an emotional wreck right now, the ending...I was so worried that you weren't going to have a reconciliation between Tom and Harry but I knew there had to be because the story became focused around their relationship (which I love). But just...asdflkjdsa... The ending was perfect, of course I don't want it to end one bit. I seriously just want to keep on reading and I know this is going to be a fic that stays with me and will ruin my life and haunt me for at least the next few days...weeks xD I wish that Tom had actually been under Daphnes potion, and that he didn't mean to do any of that and I was kind of upset that he was aware, but tbh I actually did also love the twist, it was completely unexpected. When i first started reading that bit I thought hang on...maybe Tom is just pretending...but then when he started torturing Harry, I thought naaahhhh he would never but THEN you gave him the perfect reason...and I was just not prepared for that.
I'm so sorry I feel like this is going to look like I'm just going on a wee rant about it's faults but I swear there's a point. The only problems I felt with the fic were that...a lot of the details were missed...? We were told that James was a death eater and that he betrayed the order...but then we're told nothing more? And the relationship with Hermione kind of went...completely nowhere...and Ron? I was confused when he was brought in and swiftly flung back out, and no mentions of Sirius. But all of these things don't really matter to me? they'd be little ways to improve the fic, but really I feel the fic was more about Harrys relationship with Voldemort and more importantly with Tom. I loved the development with their relationship and how they grew to be so close! I only wish that we could have seen more of that interaction, like Tom at the ball getting bored and wanting to entertain Harry by firting with Daphne. I just loved that, and i could just imagine if Harry and Riddle had known each other from younger ages, a mischievous duo running around the dark lords lair. But yeah, I'm kind of happy knowing that Harry and Tom are going to go off into the sunset together (with a rather disgruntled Mcgonagall I imagine xD ) but I still want to see more! have like another "3 years later" and have Harry and Tom be kidnapped and returned to Voldemort or something xD Sorry, I love your ending, I'm just really unhappy the story had to end at all! This review is probably going to be practically unreadable and not make a lot of sense, but when I really love a fic I have to just write immediately so this is probably going to come off really emotional xD

But THANK YOU! for such an awesome fic, I feel my unhealthy attachment to Harry and Toms relationship has been satisfied, and I know I can always return to reread for a good time :P xxx
the starrose chapter 37 . 7/13/2018
It was a nice read. The ending was a bit abrupt but it was nice. Your language is a bit flowery at times. But the character building was very good and I was hooked on to the story the whole time. Good luck for whatever you write next!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/19/2018
I'm a bit sick of Harry's naivete, though it is to be expected. Freat tale, so far.
CelticProngs chapter 23 . 4/18/2018
Hi. Umm... so I was wondering if I could post this story on archive of our own and give you full credit tell people to follow and support you on here. I'm asking this because this is by far one of my favorite fanfictions! It took me many years of reading fanfictions too find this work of art. I would post it under the name CelticProngs so if you have or want an account on archive of our own then you can make one under your preferred username. I'm asking to do this so that more people could read this wonderful story that you have crafted. I hope that you read this and I know that you might not. If you do read this please respond to tell me if I can or can't do this. This will all be for nothing if you have already posted the story and I just cant find it. If that is the case I'm so sorry for disturbing you about this. I hope that you have a lovely day and keep up the amazing writing in your stories to come!
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 37 . 3/26/2018
I have so many conflicting feels! Such a good story! So glad you finished! I love Tom AND Voldemort! My only regret is that V was too power hungry for Harry to ever settle into friendship with him. AMAZING JOB!
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 33 . 3/25/2018
Omg you're thirteen! HOW! Such a good writer! Omg!
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 24 . 3/25/2018
Not the biggest fan of Astoria but way better than Daphne of course! Loved the duel omg
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 21 . 3/25/2018
Don't measure your success by quantity of reviews!
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