It’s such a pity this story died I was really enjoying reading it.

I really like the end of chapter 28. Very few of these stories make me laugh like that.

I enjoyed re-reading these stories, and I keep hoping to see more of them. Thanks.

Why do you give Vala such massive leeway? Its not even plausible. She gets called to DC, and Landry somehow has the ability to send her off world, and what about her always making a mess of military operations? You've got a good story with good writing, just a poor grasp of military hierarchy, federal government procedures, interpersonal relationships, chain if command, how much a department of the military has in a tears budget and the list goes on and on. Are you in middle school? I figure at least one of you is female which explains Vala being around at all, but her lack of morals should have gotten her killed. And why didn't you just let Daniel Zat her to shut her the hell up? Sorry guys,

This was a great chapter and a great ending to the arc.

I like the story, but I really hate Vala. I'm talking true hatred here. Lol

Well your writing is good.

Good story! I'm just getting caught up, but it seems that Samantha and Jackson have suddenly (more so than in TV) forgotten that they are a part of a chain of command. They knew they weren't going to go after them, but we'll see. Next chapter!

Wow, how have I not found this before?! It is a fantastic and consistent continuation of SG-1. All very in character - in particular Cam. Perhaps Daniel and Vala may be 'fighting' too much - they'd settled a little by the end of season 10 and were quite in sync at times during their working relationship (maybe there's a reason for their current antagonism however). Overall I think it's just like watching the show. I hope you haven't given up on this because I want to know what Athena took from Vala and also whether what happened with the Tokra will be found out. Your synopsis about the next story - another lot of people from earth has me intrigued. Oh and I really loved the talk Cam had with Vala, definitely overdue and nice to see it from Cam rather than Daniel. Though I love Daniel/Vala. Thanks for the enjoyable read.

I love this fic. It has the feel of the show in tone, pacing, etc, and the characters are down to a T. I can't wait to read more. :)

I call staff weapon. That line wins. :P

Well, you certainly have my attention.

Brilliant! You writers really write out the missions and the characters exactly like they were in the show, even as you show them growing and changing as is inevitable. The mission choices so far really do reflect how the Ori arc was - not really missions of exploration, but more of diplomacy and searching, as well as having a overarching conspiracy that keeps growing even as they cut of pieces of it. I realize you already have quite a few episodes listed out for this project, but I do wonder if you'll ever throw in an 'exploration' episode - dial a new address, send a malp, and go get in their own brand of trouble on yet another new world.

I've just read all 33 chapters pf this and I'm actually amazed. The plotting is perfec - just like an actual TV series, if not better - and the writing is spot on. THank you for diverting me for a few glorious hours!

I usually wait until I am -completely- done with a story before taking the time to review, but I had to say how much I am enjoying this. Your characterizations are awesome and I enjoy the 'missions' you all have come up with. I sincerely look forward to finishing what is posted and reading further updates. :)