Reviews for Blindsided |
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![]() ![]() I am reading all your one-shots now. How do you do this? I admire your writing style, ideas & craft so very much. Many thanks! |
![]() ![]() Many many thanks. I thoroughly enjoy your short stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Just a little teeny tiny sliver of hope? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... at their age, they were still so cute lol Let hope, they would make a move lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great little fix, loved it. We can only hope that they weren't too dunderheaded to owl each other after... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even more delicious than a dark chocolate amaretto truffle with raspberry reduction, crowned with hazelnut cream and striped with flaming caramel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... To quote from "1776"-"Solitary. Celibate. I hate it." Both of them so deserve each other, don't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, what a lovely little piece, full of possibilities... or not. I'm impressed by how much of story you've told in so few words. The way that you paint the characters is wonderful, and I like seeing them a mature, relatively content adults. lol... I would also like to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much! It's so sweet and not gratuitous at all! I have to admit,I was having a really rough day and I had just sat down with a bowl of oatmeal topped with honey and opened up your fic. When I got to the line about Severus eating the exact same thing, it immediately cheered me up! But that aside, this is a really sweet tale and it leaves me wanting more, which all good writing should do. Thank you so much for sharing it! -llorolalluvia |
![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this should be longer than a oneshot. :) I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Although I'm a sucker for a happy ending I think your scene is just about perfect. Nice. |
![]() ![]() Please continue this, you have really set up an atmosphere. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely piece thank you |