| Reviews for Frozen Water |
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   MoonlightDetectiveEdogawaIrene chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 amazing |
| Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 6 . 1/12/2019 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
| Jacqui chapter 6 . 6/29/2018 Awesome story. Is Jack loosing his powers or something? I hope not, cuz that would be a bit cliché. What would be better is if he was somehow gaining more power, or being used as a vessel for some other being. Whatever happens, I really hope there is some sort of duel, where everyone gets to see how powerful Jack really is, and a personal moment, like Percy witnessing one of Jacks memories or something, and being able to connect with him. Whatever you do, very well written so far. |
| CyberLja chapter 2 . 3/21/2018 You jump back and forth to much |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 OH. EM. GEE. You are, like, the BEST author I've EVER read before and like, you're sooo good at jumping povs to povs. I, like, REALLY wanna be like you. Like, totally. Socool and like, yeah. Anyways, having only like 165 favs is sooo amazing. I mean like, the plot and all is, like, promising and stuff but, the pov jumps are like, TOTALLY AWESOME. You soooo deserve a million favs and follows. Omg, this is, like, SUPER COOL. Can't you, like, update please? This is like, literally THE only thing that keeps me alive, like, right now. FUck the pov jumps. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 no update please |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 That's... the teaser? Oh wait lookie here. You actually KNOW how it write narratives without jumping from one perspective to another! Wooohooo!... |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2017 Alright. I'm confused. On what's happening. FUCKING STICK TO ONE FUCKING PERSPECTIVE ALRIGHT? I'M DROPPING THE FUCKING FUCK-BOMBS RIGHT HERE CUS YOU DEFINITELY DO NOT KNOW HOW TO FUCKING WRITE A FUCKING NARRATIVE. Like it? Love it? Hate it? I hate it. Already. Since the first chapter. I actually thought that was the prologue but CLEARLY, THAT WASN'T THE CASE. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/1/2017 Can you stick to one fucking perspective please? It's getting really (that's how you spell "realy") confusing and it's kinda pissing me off. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2017 Can you edit your work? Your spelling is atrocious. Can't you even spell "realy"? And Jack can get sick. But he can't get hypothermia or a cold. Don't make that mistake. He's the fucking Spirit of Winter for one, he's ALWAYS cold. |
| Demiwizard dragon girl chapter 6 . 11/18/2016 PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON! x INFINITY! |
| ShadowQueen198 chapter 1 . 6/1/2016 Wait as Guardians can they see through the mist? |
| Castella Leena chapter 6 . 10/22/2015 I love this fic! PLEASE CONTINUE! I can't wait to see what happens! |
| Dragons and Dragons chapter 6 . 9/23/2015 Um, is this abandoned? |
| fandom.fantasy chapter 6 . 8/31/2015 PLEASE CONTINUE! :D |
