So! The little bit when Ran goes "Don't you ever compare me to Kase, Ken."

I love it. It makes me so happy. For some reason I feel the entire story is encased in that line.

omfg! this was just hilarious. and the lines are absolutely clever. very much in their character. hope you'd right another ranken soon.

Nice, I likey

I loved it, fantastic job. Although it kind of annoyed me how you kept using descriptions like 'the older boy' rather than their names, but other than that, I still loved it. It was extremely funny!

Like a few other fanfic authors you have developed an intersting Aya. one that oes that and it makes the story more interesting than series of : 'hn'... it was funny too. thats all i have to say really(unless you ask a two page essay on why i liked your fic or something like that...) no questions, marriage proposal or death threats... anyways. keep up the good work. :)

christ, you're stories are so entertaining. :) love your writing. it's so refreshing!

This is quite nicely written and - sweet. I don't know what to say anymore and yeah... it's definitely hard to comment one-shots O_o how odd, ne? Anyways... I did notice you messed up with "doesn't" and I think that's the only error I've found.

But nice work, anyways!

I could swear on my life that chicken nuggets are aphrodesiac. ...Anyway, cute story! *glomps Aya* This is one of the few stories I like with a glompable Aya! Keep 'em coming!

*hearts* Beautiful! _

Kawaii desu!

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Erm. that's all the feedback I can give! I liked it, great characterization and plot and cuteness!

Take care, Ja ne

ROFLMAO~!

XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA~!

*dies laughing*

That was funny as hell as well as sweet as chocolate:}

Keep it up!

-Melle_

a good fic.i think thats my first WK fic i've .pleeeze keep writing.

I think this is one of my favorite Ran/Ken stories. The characters are wonderful, not exactly IN character, but wonderful just the same. I tend to ignore a lot of the angst in my own Weiß fiction because it's stupid! I don't need all that crap when I'm tring to write loooooove stories.

0 LOVE! Anyway P, your story is good. Anything you write is good! Amazing, I wonder how you do it. Ran was so sweet in this, like you know he really is(or should be.) I keep saying he's a pink puffball like his sis, though not as smart. _ Well, good luck in the future! Please continue to have fun writing. I look forward to the results!

hehehehehehehe...i just adore it, i really do, 'specially they're conversations.

I liked it. Vary much.

Vary good. personally, I liked the chicken nugget idea. I think you should've playe dup teh child in the vent a bit more. You had it come into play, then.. you just sort of dropped it. All in all though, I liked.