Where the fuck is the CHEIF?

It’s disgusting to use rape as a punishment for someone.

It’s actually good that the Twileks kills all their former slave owners? Why would you paint people fighting for their liberation as bad?

I like this fanfiction. I think you nailed the power of the UNSC. Ignore the haters that think you made them overpowered.

The Terrans should also build a super weapon and start a Cold War.

Damn you should've called the MOAB the Chief if your gonna name ships after Hood and Johnson lol

ill be honest

even if this series is over i still think the UNSC is still too "UNDERPOWERED"

Good story.

The prowess of the refitted forerunner dread-naughts is very accurate. Because the forerunners make their stuff to last, by last I mean mainly last several eons because being forced to be retired from service. In my opinion, the forerunner warships' armor (not shields) can withstand non-stop bombardment that could destroy entire systems with ease, though the same thing cannot be said when it comes to hardlight rounds of just the weaponry used on said dread-naughts, what I'm saying is; the Empire is officially f*cked.

It I am correct, an analysis of an outcome resulting from a major skirmish involving the death star and the UNSCDF that was protecting Earth in hall 2 and 3, it showed that it the defense force battlegroup were to go up against the death star. Didn't really come out good, for the Empire. The UNSC took minimal losses by staying out of the death star's death ray and point defense guns and basically stood there throwing MAC fire at the station, if someone doesn't agree with me, then how'd some rebel pilots done some damage while making their way to the weak point? A MAC could, possibly, do as almost enough damage, that would be half as strong, or even AS strong, as the death star's beam being tested in the rogue one movie. Though, a barrage of nukes would be more then enough to leave only a massive husk in the death star's place.

50 Spartans?! Holy shit!

“a strange looking craft which at first glance, looked like a ice cream cone” did you seriously bring in the sun crusher? The Vong may want to start running

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Uhh, I won't go into the amount of spelling and grammitcal errors these stories are rife with, I will say that no SW ship has the ability to hyper that close to a planet. The gravity well of a system determines how close ships can hyper to. Yavin was a gas giant which would put it on the larger size of a gravity well. Imperial ships would have had to hyper into the outer edge of the system and work it's way in and would not have been able to drop out of hyper practically in orbit of Yavin 4. The fact that slipspace drives CAN would be one of the major tactical advantages the UNSC had.

I’m glad you’re finally putting the Spartans into action but the logo you used to represent them ( the spartan helmet with two spears on a shield) is not accurate. its actually an eagle with its talons gripping arrows in its left, and a lighting bolt in its right, with a star over its head. Don’t believe me just look up “halo spartan symbol” and you’ll find it. I hope this helps if you ever write another story or add to halo chronicles. Your welcome.