Read it in one day. Waste of time

This was such an amazing fic. Even if i had to suffer through Sasuke being dumb AND kakashi. Happy ending was extremely worth it.

Thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you. It is one of the most beautiful, emotional fanfic I've read. I'm crying right now, and send you lots of love.

Me encantan tus reacciones del manga al final de cada capítulo xD

Oh mi Dios.

yooo i really thought he would stay this time

I started this story on the "archive of our own" website, and since I was so curious to know what happened next. I rushed here to read it.

First of all, I wanted to admit that I was very appreciative of your work. Indeed, you have so much talent. In addition to the scenario which is just breathtaking, you managed to describe these characters that I loved so well, especially Sasuke 3. I went from laughter to tears, from hiccups to anguish, from pain to joy, thank you for having transmitted all these emotions to me through these 42 chapters.

Besides, your Sasuke made me very sad. It was such a shame that he chose to retire from the world after the fourth great Shinobi war. Although I understand it, it fits perfectly with his character in the manga. Her meeting with Hana is a breath of fresh air in his life. I really liked the few flash backs where you retraced the reunion between Sasuke and Sakura. I would have liked you to describe these moments more. I admit I had a little trouble understanding Sakura's detachment for Sasuke, with a completely reversed dynamic. It was frustrating but at the same time well deserved, Sasuke had to drool more to conquer Sakura at the end. I literally fell in love with Sasuke again when I saw him with Hana. Sakura is so right when she talks about the sweet sides of everyone. It's so true.

The quest to find Sakura and then to destroy Masaru was masterful. The fights, the descriptions, everything is so well conducted. Honestly, this is one of my favorite Naruto fanfiction. Well done.

Finally, I wanted you to know that I think you did better than Kishimoto. The fight between Naruto and Sasuke at the end (in Shippûden) had moderately convinced me, your version is more realistic for my taste. Going from fury to remorse after a fight is irrelevant. Naruto is too perceived as a Jesus in the manga and it is a pity that Sakura has no place in the redemption of Sasuke.

Ps: I don't forgive you for Kakashi's death, RIP.

This is such a brilliant and well-written story. You have captivated my attention to the point where I see my classes and work suffering from it in the coming days haha. I love the way you write Sasuke; it is true to him but still imaginative. As I saw things unfold up to this point I have to say that I am very excited to keep reading. The way you did the back and forth with Katahana-time/pre-war-time was very emotion invoking. I love your voice and writing style and this story is definitely a favorite of mine!

Okay but why would Tsunade hate Sasuke? If anything the animosity between Konoha and Sasuke is mutual. Konoha sanctioned the genocide of Uchiha clan, they were going to kill Sasuke when he was just 7. They scaoegoated his brother. Sasuke has all the right to hate Konoha. Anyone in his shoes would. If anything Tsunade should issue an official opology to Sasuke for the Uchiha massacre sanctioned by her own establishment.

It's like Sasuke forgot about his own powers. Ms Sasuke could god his own against 5 kages and this Sasuke with damn EMS is a fucking joke.
12 yo Sasuke had more skills than this. This isn't even about op, have you seen Hebi Sasuke? His skills are outstanding. Sasuke is one if the most powerful shinobis on the planet and he looks like a clown here.

Hana behaves like a 4 yo not 7 really. 7 should be a bit more mature.

Sakura is nowhere close to Naruto and Sasuke's level, it would make no sense for them to train with her. She would ger rekt without them even trying. XD.
Why tf would Naruto or Sasuke train with Sakura, it'd be a waste of their time and they'd have to massively hold back in order to not kill her.

There's one problem here in chapter 3. Sasuke was not a psycho murderer when he went rogue, he went full crazy only post Itachi trutu reveal, i.e, Kage summit arc. That is the only arc in the entire manga where Sasuke is full bloodlusted and ready to kill anyone in his way. Before that, even after going rogue, he did not kill anyone.

Sasuke absolutely OOC, Sakura being too bitchy. The only saving grace was Hana.

Sasuke stop being such a little bitch and just tell her how you feel man. your missing out man