Oh my God, this is SO melt-worthy! You really should put a warning in your synopsis! (like I ever do that, right? LOL) This is definitely one story I'll be re-reading a lot! Sigh... And I love that I can picture this all happening! )

This time, I liked the way you used your narrative! There are some beautiful words and sentences here, and the story is awesome in itself. Great job!

Omg this is so lovely and beautifully written. Good job. And thank you its always nice to see something new from you!

Such a sweet, sweet story! To be honest, I haven't read the original, but I think the story can perfectly stand on it's own. It's really lovely, romantic and just a great read. Very well done, as always :)

Oh, that was incredibly romantic & sweet! I think it is one of your best stories. Great job! :)

Such a romantic, and sweet one shot, I loved it. :)