This was by far my favorite chapter! I love the morals of black and white with the splash of grey being brought up. The elderly couple were nice to Zelda, fortunately. I feel like that is always such a hard thing to write about, and you've done it excellently!

I cannot believe that went so well! And holy rupees. I did not like Anna kissing Link, I legit felt like a cat with its hacked raised.

I'm just glad Telma isn't dead. I'm not sure what occurred during her possession and I sort of hope we learn a little bit more. I love Telma, glad to see her in this! when her and link hugged I sort of just melted. it was a wholesome scene to witness after all the chaos.

this keeps on getting more and more exciting! With Link and Zelda side by side, things feel right in the world. Destiny is a fickle thing. I love that the inspiration for Trash City is based off something in real life. I would've never learned about those trash towns before this, so it was interesting to look into. I love those strokes of inspiration. I'm excited to see where their journey takes them!

Zelda's decision to stay with him made me love this Zelda even more. I was sort of worried she would go back and then meet him under even more dire circumstances, or that he would be caught again. Perfect development of her character!

Its nice to see an appearance of a different villain! I knew I recognized the name, but couldn't remember the game. But I have a bad memory so...now I want to reply Oracle of Ages.

its cool that another villain is being used for this, i love when they get their spotlight in fanfiction.

zelda and link are in for a wild ride.

Jon, you gotta worry about it! Follow your gut instincts.

I honestly can't blame either of them for this scuffle. Link's life has definitely been very different then Zelda. and despite being nobility, its still hard to preform under that amount of pressure.

at least her father knew to drop it and let her handle it! she will be the queen of the kingdom one day.

Bravo Miss Allura!

LOVE LOVE LOVE Zelda being the Hero, and Link being the damsel. Love. So much love. This was awesome.

Great story, but the romance tag was unneeded. Sure there was some teasing attraction here or there, but no romantic conclusion.

Yeah, I think I've heard of that person before... not cool. Anyways, I like the story so far. Don't know if you can tell or not, but I am reviewing this and the date is March 16, 2019. I am waiting for you to do your next chapter on Starless. I like it so far, but you need to finish. But, hey, life is life and I know that you are busy. (pats you on the back) #LoveYourFanFics!

This fic was wonderful! You write such fun fantasy. Your plot was so engaging that I was thinking about it all day. I loved your depiction of Vera and your characterization of Link was top notch. Your work was a pleasure to read and I'm excited to see what you do next!

I have to admit I feel the ending was rushed and a little weak as a result. Not enough detail in the fight, trial, or interaction. It also felt forced.